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Review Detail of Thunder_XTEH in The Broken Gold Prophecy

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Is it possible to reduce the paragraph lengths, makes it harder to read otherwise very good

The Broken Gold Prophecy

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Thanks for the feedback! I'll see where I can break up the paragraphs more.

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I just finished going through and editing all of the chapters and breaking up the paragraphs more where I can. Thanks again for the feedback!