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Correct me If I am wrong, and this may has been stated in the earlier chapters but you as well as I know that they were released quite a while ago, so I may have forgotten some things already. Isn't 10 the max? So If he has 20 Trick which is way beyond what one should be able to...is it because of this that he has the storing Ability If you say it is because of his Trick? Or ist ist just mandetory to get it at higher levels. I mean his mom is 9.3 I Think and John is 7.5 and can't do this. And wel....considering that she was unable to protect her children.....yeah
100%. An AI, like Chatgpt, always uses the same words to describe things. If words like " sprawling," " a mix of," " a testament, " etc, are there every time something is described....you know it is chatgpt. Also, the constant jumping from place to place is a big indicator. If that isn't enough, there are programs like Chatgpt, but there are other programs to identify if certain texts are made by Ai and I did it and guess what? :D
I mean, you told me more or less that I am correct, so.......
you believe what you believe bro
my Lord?
Not going to lie, but you either need to change his House, change his character, or rewrite the synopsis because Hufflepuff and schemer make zero sense. Also, if he is so super talented and obsessed with magic (I don't know because I haven't read it, but it sounds like it in the synopsis), then he needs to be in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin.
It sounds like it was written by an AI, which it probably was, and it doesn't have any depth to it. The character confuses me to no end because he changes his mood more than women change their clothes, and he's apparently ready to talk about what he can do. But in the end, he can't, because, like I said, it was probably written by the AI. And there are like 15 chapters in 5 months so there's that!
I don't understand the hype around this novel, but considering it seems to appeal mostly to younger readers who are illiterate...I understand it. The story is rife with clichés, except for the part where his sister doesn't suddenly gain an extraordinary talent around chapter 20, which is somewhat unexpected because this Novel could be renamed to RE: Cliche. However, the rest involves the author contriving reasons for other characters to be stronger than the main character (MC), seemingly to prevent the MC from becoming too powerful. The concept of time in the story is also poorly handled. For instance, in the early chapters, he was supposed to meet a woman named Alex at noon. She comments that it's not nearly noon and questions why he's there, but then, within two minutes, it suddenly is noon. The lack of attention to detail is insane. Written by a kid it seems. Additionally, the story falls into the trap of claiming that leveling up isn't as important as other tasks, yet randomly, characters who have focused on leveling up all along end up being more powerful than him, which feels like a weak excuse for a plot. This novel is disappointing overall.
Go to sleep, kid. you obviously haven't read the original Story.
I assume you haven't read the Fanfic. The problem here is in the fact that the real Voldemort when Back in time and meets a Huffepuff him? I don't remember what he wanted from his younger self, but Voldemort wasn't your average nice, kinda, and all forgiving one. He would have Killed his younger self here and there.