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Did you hear about the kidnapping at school? #HolyJokerSquat #CornbringerSquat He had a good Dream ;) It was me, and I had a Dream about you liking my profile for no reason at all!

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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick11d
    respondió a LoserIam

    Correct me If I am wrong, and this may has been stated in the earlier chapters but you as well as I know that they were released quite a while ago, so I may have forgotten some things already. Isn't 10 the max? So If he has 20 Trick which is way beyond what one should be able to...is it because of this that he has the storing Ability If you say it is because of his Trick? Or ist ist just mandetory to get it at higher levels. I mean his mom is 9.3 I Think and John is 7.5 and can't do this. And wel....considering that she was unable to protect her children.....yeah

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
    In unOrdinary as John Doe
    Cómic · LoserIam
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick11d
    Comentado por

    I have a question.....is the storing Ability only something that he has or his mother and her family as well?Because it is something that isn't canon

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
    In unOrdinary as John Doe
    Cómic · LoserIam
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick12d
    Comentado por

    Well, he should be able to copy her Ability as his Level is higher, but he is powerful enough either way.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
    In unOrdinary as John Doe
    Cómic · LoserIam
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick12d
    respondió a Tarek_Aboshady

    There is nothing wrong with it, but the problem is those type of stories never can and never will be enjoyable because Ai will make every Chapter mor or less the same. Same writing style, same words and characters will feel less like characters. ;(

    The Infinity Mage Satoru Vermillion
    Cómic · Tarek_Aboshady
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick13d
    respondió a Nope_6466

    100%. An AI, like Chatgpt, always uses the same words to describe things. If words like " sprawling," " a mix of," " a testament, " etc, are there every time something is described....you know it is chatgpt. Also, the constant jumping from place to place is a big indicator. If that isn't enough, there are programs like Chatgpt, but there are other programs to identify if certain texts are made by Ai and I did it and guess what? :D

    The Infinity Mage Satoru Vermillion
    Cómic · Tarek_Aboshady
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick14d
    respondió a Nope_6466

    well, it is a copy paste from chatgpt so yeah.....

    The Infinity Mage Satoru Vermillion
    Cómic · Tarek_Aboshady
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick17d
    Comentado por

    Heho, good to see you back;).

    Ch 9 Chapter 9
    In unOrdinary as John Doe
    Cómic · LoserIam
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick22d
    Comentado por

    Chatgpt is powerful in this one ;)

    Ch 2 Chapter 1
    Jaehaerys Targaryen: The Dragon Mage
    Derivados de obras · Vikrant_Utekar_5653
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick22d
    respondió a Onlythree

    I mean, you told me more or less that I am correct, so.......

    'Just as I thought,' While enjoying a rice cracker, Garp grinned while observing the boy underneath him, 'You have the potential, Smoker.'
    One Piece: White Hunter
    Cómic · BravoBuds
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick23d
    respondió a Onlythree

    you believe what you believe bro

    'Just as I thought,' While enjoying a rice cracker, Garp grinned while observing the boy underneath him, 'You have the potential, Smoker.'
    One Piece: White Hunter
    Cómic · BravoBuds
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick28d
    Comentado por

    my Lord?

    "They're on their way now, my lord. Shall I tell them to postpone the meeting?"
    Trials of the Throne
    Derivados de obras · JonSnow_44
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1mth
    respondió a bbjessebb2

    Not going to lie, but you either need to change his House, change his character, or rewrite the synopsis because Hufflepuff and schemer make zero sense. Also, if he is so super talented and obsessed with magic (I don't know because I haven't read it, but it sounds like it in the synopsis), then he needs to be in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin.

    Harry Potter's Book of Sins
    Derivados de obras · bbjessebb2
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick1mth
    Publicado por

    It sounds like it was written by an AI, which it probably was, and it doesn't have any depth to it. The character confuses me to no end because he changes his mood more than women change their clothes, and he's apparently ready to talk about what he can do. But in the end, he can't, because, like I said, it was probably written by the AI. And there are like 15 chapters in 5 months so there's that!

    Game of Thrones: The Dragonborn.
    Derivados de obras · RaccoonLeague
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick2mth
    Comentado por

    is this still beeing Updated or abonded?

    Ch 129 53
    Fanfiction I am reading
    Cómic · Shivam_031
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick2mth
    Comentado por

    good thing he got stronger because a "natural" liger isn't really that strong. he weigths a lot more than a tiger or lion and this is burden itself. ;)

    Ch 16 Chapter 16 : Bonding with Simba
    House Of The Dragons (HOTD) : Orphan SI
    Derivados de obras · KK9494
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick2mth
    Publicado por

    I don't understand the hype around this novel, but considering it seems to appeal mostly to younger readers who are illiterate...I understand it. The story is rife with clichés, except for the part where his sister doesn't suddenly gain an extraordinary talent around chapter 20, which is somewhat unexpected because this Novel could be renamed to RE: Cliche. However, the rest involves the author contriving reasons for other characters to be stronger than the main character (MC), seemingly to prevent the MC from becoming too powerful. The concept of time in the story is also poorly handled. For instance, in the early chapters, he was supposed to meet a woman named Alex at noon. She comments that it's not nearly noon and questions why he's there, but then, within two minutes, it suddenly is noon. The lack of attention to detail is insane. Written by a kid it seems. Additionally, the story falls into the trap of claiming that leveling up isn't as important as other tasks, yet randomly, characters who have focused on leveling up all along end up being more powerful than him, which feels like a weak excuse for a plot. This novel is disappointing overall.

    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasía · Yolohy
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick2mth
    respondió a Rishav_Saha_1096

    Go to sleep, kid. you obviously haven't read the original Story.

    "Pardon my intrusion, but the lady can have my seat; I don't find these bus seats comfortable anyways," I say softly, removing myself from my crouched position on my seat and receiving strange looks as I do.
    COTE: L Lawliet In The Classroom Of The Elite
    Cómic · MilkywayAndromeda
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick2mth
    respondió a Peryite

    You really don't get the gist of what I am saying here, so I just let you be thinking what you think is correct.

    HP: The Otherworlder
    Derivados de obras · BS6SC
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick3mth
    respondió a Peryite

    I assume you haven't read the Fanfic. The problem here is in the fact that the real Voldemort when Back in time and meets a Huffepuff him? I don't remember what he wanted from his younger self, but Voldemort wasn't your average nice, kinda, and all forgiving one. He would have Killed his younger self here and there.

    HP: The Otherworlder
    Derivados de obras · BS6SC
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  • Jasonenrick
    Jasonenrick3mth
    Publicado por

    The first 100 chapters are awesome, but it kinda goes downhill afterwards. Everything you expect from the first 10 chapters won't be uphold after around 80 chapters and then the cliche starts hella. Have fun with it. I am not gonna kill more brain cells.

    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Oriental · PurpleSpring
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