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Greblem17drespondió a PABELOI don't want to say that I've abandoned it. But it's been so long since I've done anything with it that One Piece lore has changed drastically. I doubt my ability to continue with the original story without multiple chapter rewrites. That causes writer's block and kills my motivation to do anything whenever I sit down to write. Hopefully I will get back to it at some point. But don't be expectant. Sorry.
Chapter 27: Nice day for fishing ain't it- Greblem1mthComentado por
Appreciated the Viva La Dirt League reference.
Chapter 27: Nice day for fishing ain't it - Greblem5mthComentado por
Most iterations of Superman have magic resistance barely above that of an ordinary man.
As an invulnerable Superman, Peter's current magic resistance was as astonishingly powerful as his physical resistance. - Greblem6mthComentado por
Couldn't he have Kimimaro swallow a half dozen explosive tags, ignite them, and switch back to his body before they explode
"Cause I banged your mom. We don't have time to chit chat so move!" Kuzo, as Kimimaro, went to his original body and grabbed a few explosive tags, and he attached them to Kimimaro's body. - Greblem9mthrespondió a Raistlins_Ghost1
I'm assuming the author keeps replacing the Utatane and Mitokado clans with random clans.
Kaito thought to himself. After this period of investigation, Hyuga, Aburame and Inuzuka had basically gathered information on the Sarutobi, Yamanaka and Akimichi clans. - Greblem9mthComentado por
The previous paragraph says 15 to both attack and dueling, in this paragraph they are both 12?
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Stopped reading halfway through when you were explaining your thoughts while writing. Sorry, but I want to enjoy the delicious pie not hear a lecture on how it was invented.You have a good story and I really enjoy reading it. After 5 chapters I knew you knew what you were doing. I rarely leave comments on stories I read, I'll try to change that in hopes of tipping the balance and not loosing this story.
Ch 62 Notes (It's a rant) - Greblem10mthComentado por
I think you reversed the time difference.
"How many times must I repeat myself for you to understand? This is my domain... Everything within this world is under my control. Including space, time... and your pitiful life. I won't let you die, at least not naturally. Besides, every second that passes here is equivalent to seventy-two hours outside. So, we still have plenty of time." - Greblem10mthComentado por
Loved the Rick and Morty addition. 👍
"It's a waste of time. A bunch of people runnin' around bumpin' into each other got a guy up front says "2 + 2," and the people in the back say, "4." Then the bell rings and they give you a carton of milk and a piece of paper that says you can go take a dump or somethin'. I mean, it's not a place for smart people, Alfred. I know that's not a popular opinion, but that's my two cents on the issue. So I don't need to go to school to be smart. I can get homeschooled for god's sake." Bruce defended. - Greblem1yrComentado por
Perfect Deadpool 👍
Wade chuckled softly. "That's who I'd want to play me in my superhero movie if Ryan Reynolds was busy or dead. God forbid," he added, making a religious cross-motion. - Greblem1yrComentado por
Land of Rain would be difficult unless a river in Land of Rivers has a deep enough channel all the way through the country.
And it can also lead to other places, such as the Land of Water and the Land of Rain. After the shipping industry develops, it is equivalent to monopolizing a port business, which is how Gato developed. - Greblem1yrComentado por
30+70=120 ???
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What does this mean? Are they tougher to pop? Do they have 100x his strength when created?
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Three fruits in each category? So, Three fruits, one in each category-> Three fruits total with one of each? Or, Three fruits in each category-> Nine fruits total eating three in each of the three categories?
Finally, I wish that I can eat three devil fruits of each category and not have any weaknesses. - Greblem1yrComentado por
100,000 days actually
He looked carefully and saw that after the balance of skill points was one hundred billion, he suddenly took a breath of cold air, so many skill points, one million points a day, it would take one hundred million years to use up, this and this… - Greblem1yrComentado por
two men one woman
"There's a rumor in school about Bi Jialiang, Jian Qingli, and Li Chengqian. A rumor about one man and two women…" As he thought about it, Zhao Peng's thoughts went wild. - Greblem1yrComentado por
Why do you write paragraphs out of order?
My bare hand began to smoke as the light magic began to damage my Iron Skin. Points were being taken away from my DP bar, but since it was negligent, they quickly filled back up again. Just as the spear was about to hit me in the face, I stopped it with my bare hand.