i like the story, but this is hard to read. bad grammar

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Great to have you back mate. just do it on your own pace and stay safe.

dropped?

thx for the chapter!

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grat thx for the chapter

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why make a story when you dislike the main character i dont't understand his why he is reincarnated, it don't add anything to the story. he is an orphan and didn't get any familial love. So why cut out the mother from the story? I as a reader have no idea why he is acting like a bad guy. just another story going way too fast.