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WE CAN'T BE YOUR BROTHER ANYMORE

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Lee la novela WE CAN'T BE YOUR BROTHER ANYMORE escrita por el autor AYESHA_FAHIM publicada en WebNovel. She has two brothers, with no blood relation, but with strong bonding. But circumstances make them separate, Will they come back for their little sister? of course they will, but not as a brother........

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She has two brothers, with no blood relation, but with strong bonding. But circumstances make them separate, Will they come back for their little sister? of course they will, but not as a brother.........

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Axel_Ash
Axel_AshLv1Axel_Ash

The title of your book is super good no doubt, your plot is strong, I love your character arrangement, and I'm pretty sure your story will be super good.

Maryam_Mayo
Maryam_MayoLv1Maryam_Mayo

There is only one chapter, so perhaps it's too early for a review, but I got captivated by the cover of course, but the synopsis was just the opposite which increased my interest. Furthermore the way you start the story form the childhood of all the characters, I think it will be easier for the readers to know the leading characters of your novels very well, and overall it was fun to read, keep writing waiting you to reveal other characters and chapters too. Good Luck for your new book :)

onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayyLv11onedaysomedayy

Love the start of the novel! It's adorable with in-depth characters. The story is entertaining with great details and character dynamics. Can't wait for updates as the story progresses. Great job!

Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4Rin_Nurnia

The story is nice although I suggest you to separate the dialogues into new paragraphs. When you combined all of them in one paragraph, it's a bit confusing to read. A short example: "Dialogue," said Henry. (new paragraph) "Dialogue," Frankie smiled.

somi_n
somi_nLv2somi_n

I know it's a little too early to review but I just have to. Just reading the synopsis and first chapter got me immersed in this book. And I dropped romance novels a long time ago. I think the synopsis and first chapter just made me think twice about dropping romance novels. Great write up!

AuthorZamsii321
AuthorZamsii321Lv1AuthorZamsii321

Your novel is really alluring, I especially love the characters explanation. The way the characters are being explained and the setting is unique keep it up

Jenival_Enyia
Jenival_EnyiaLv12Jenival_Enyia

I love the way the author took me from the beginning of the book till the end. It shows the writing quality and thoughtfulness of the author and I can't wait to read more!

Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4Moonwriting

Curious to know more about the story..I already like the characters and the world you build around them is marvellous and [img=recommend]keep it up

Khadija_Mayo
Khadija_MayoLv1Khadija_Mayo

Very Recommendable😋 The most interesting book I've ever read. The plot is unpredictable, the language choice is excellent, and the character portrayal is superb. Every chapter contains a surprising twist. Reading is an endless process. I want to keep reading to the satisfying conclusion. This book must be read; you'll become addicted👌. adoring author😍

ShinSungmi
ShinSungmiLv4ShinSungmi

The novel has an interesting premise and starts out nice, easily grabbing the attention of readers. The pace of story is good as well, and it's only three chapters Looking forward to more~

Abigail_Okoi_Obuli
Abigail_Okoi_ObuliLv11Abigail_Okoi_Obuli

The story is nice and pleasant to read. The characters are very likable and overall I would recommend it. There's a few grammatical errors here and there, but it doesn't distract from the overall story.

leeroycgna
leeroycgnaLv13leeroycgna

Good read, sometimes tough to understand and a few grammar mistakes but definitely great for your first attempt. I can see this being perfected over the next few months, I'm already getting attached to Hazel who is very cute. Poor Dad is going to have a hard time when she grows up! All in all, keep it up!

VeraMera
VeraMeraLv10VeraMera

There are only two chapters but I am hooked! The way you introduced the characters by giving them history is superb, as it connects the characters to the readers. Please keep on writing new chapters as I cannot wait for the next one :)

Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv13Little_North_Star

I love the synopsis...and the first chapter was very interesting, i think this book has the potential to be good will had to library for now.❤️

_Rockbison_
_Rockbison_Lv3_Rockbison_

Although its a very early time to review a story but still wanted to do it as l have already read this authors story and know how great she writes... This is is not any less from her previous novel... Liked the story and want to know more about it in the future.... But plzz do write the dialogues separately... As one person's dialogue in one paragraph... It wi be more easier for us to read... And as it is a very earlier stage so it won't take much time to fix it..... All the best... Hope it will also be a great work of urs...

Night_of_Dreams
Night_of_DreamsLv4Night_of_Dreams

The storyline was great Thr story quality is good and character situations are well detailed check[img=recommend].. I rate this story with flying colors... Keep up the good work author love it[img=update]

Zhoa_Fei
Zhoa_FeiLv13Zhoa_Fei

Overall there are something to be desired with the presentation of the story. The dialogue could be better separated and some of the run on sentences should be addressed. Though that doesn't mean that this story is inherently bad. It could just use some polishing. The meat of the story is very satisfying and the character relationships actually have life to them. I can buy them being together. Your intro chapter was really good.

_Carolina_writes_
_Carolina_writes_Lv4_Carolina_writes_

I have read your book. The plot of your story is good. But there are more thing you need to know and work on your story to make it much better so that you can get contract.1. Synopsis: should summarize your story but it should be mysterious so that reader would be curious to read your book. 2. Grammatical mistake and dialogues improvement.Other than that your story plot is good if you correct these things you might get contract.

Eva_Smith_0875
Eva_Smith_0875Lv1Eva_Smith_0875

The style of your story is good. I love your story title. Your plot is strong and the arrangement of characters is well. I hope you will complete it.

KiranAwan
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First of all, its synopsis is very well defined, From which the story can be determined.The start is commendable.👍😊 Hope it will be an interesting story, because the idea of ​​writing such a story does not come to everyone, so I appreciate your creativity and intelligence👏, As far as I am concerned, it will be fun while reading this story and now I would like to know more about how it goes up and down😎. So keep writing like this👀

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