Villain in the world of Naruto

I’m only going to talk about the writing in the story. First the grammar issues is not to the point where someone would drop the story because of it, but it still needs to be fixed, sometimes you don’t even know who’s speaking and that kinds of bugs me out. Second is the switch between writing styles, one moment it’s quotation marks when someone speaks and the next moment is dashes, IT DOESN’T MAKE SENSE. But the story does have potential.

I like the story for the most part and it's fine but the writing quality and just the way some chapters are formatted definitely needs a rework. I definitely suggest author to finish up whatever arc and then go on a slight hiatus just to rewrite the story. Some parts could definitely have been touched up on or just simply removed. mc also doesn't ask some certain questions that even a child would. There is a female system assistant that arrives at around chapter 26-27. It isn't a complete waifu system though as the system has been shown to be deceitful.