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Thanks for the review. I'll take your advice and work on finalizing the story after I finish the Konoha arc.
There will never be a huge emphasis on the assistant. It is only introduced so that Akuma can express his thoughts through dialogue with someone. Likewise, she will never receive a body or any physical manifestation. She can be considered an AI. Thank you for your interest in this story.
Let's begin. The claims about "God," (even though the story says that the main character is communicating with the Devil) and the system I do not understand. This is the standard beginning of many works. If you don't like the "system" tag, that's your preference. About the size of the chapters, I can agree. I write between 800 and 1800 words per chapter. I don't understand about the missing parts either. All chapters go in order. I will not say anything about the plot. Everyone has their own preferences. But thanks for the review anyway.
There is such a possibility, but I want the protagonist to have a more memorable weapon. (The prototype would be the two Death Scythes from the Darksiders series.) Thank you for your feedback.