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_DilLen

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  • _DilLen
    _DilLen2 years ago
    respondió a Mohsen

    Thanks for the review. I'll take your advice and work on finalizing the story after I finish the Konoha arc.

  • _DilLen
    _DilLen2 years ago
    respondió a Mohsen

    There will never be a huge emphasis on the assistant. It is only introduced so that Akuma can express his thoughts through dialogue with someone. Likewise, she will never receive a body or any physical manifestation. She can be considered an AI. Thank you for your interest in this story.

  • _DilLen
    _DilLen2 years ago
    respondió a EvilBlueCrystal

    Let's begin. The claims about "God," (even though the story says that the main character is communicating with the Devil) and the system I do not understand. This is the standard beginning of many works. If you don't like the "system" tag, that's your preference. About the size of the chapters, I can agree. I write between 800 and 1800 words per chapter. I don't understand about the missing parts either. All chapters go in order. I will not say anything about the plot. Everyone has their own preferences. But thanks for the review anyway.

  • _DilLen
    _DilLen2 years ago
    respondió a timeawayfromstress

    There is such a possibility, but I want the protagonist to have a more memorable weapon. (The prototype would be the two Death Scythes from the Darksiders series.) Thank you for your feedback.