Traversing The Omni-Realities

Yep five stars for me since it was my first ever book, writing above 100,000 words is no joke but an achievement😂 Okay, the fic is amateurish and I know that. I can never call my own work trash even though it was low-quality with little to no major plot development to it. Well there was plot in the first ATG arc and the rest is basically power trip and expansion of the harem as Noah jumps from one verse to another. To new readers, well, read it with little to no expectations. English be like my third learnt language but I made sure to make the story readable... Gosh, it's a miracle I haven't dropped... at least😂

Sigh, I thought it will be good. I don't like the Mc, his actions, decisions, etc. It's quite dumb MC you know. He had a parallel thinking and boosted brain capacity but all his actions are unsatisfactory for me. I don't know is this an antihero mc. I just frustrated everytime I read the MC's action.

I really liked the change in attitude the MC had in the last few chapters and it deserves the praise that you can take criticism into consideration and improve your writing, it's your first novel so no one should blame you for that. Also, the fact that you will only take a maximum of 4 girls from each world raises my expectations a lot, we all want to see sweet interactions and go deeper into their personalities and history, I read in another review that you wanted to create OP characters to counterbalance the MC, personally, I don't recommend it as it's not to anyone's liking.

I like the fact that mc is not a wuss like the most mc's after they get power but despite all that intelligence and such he still let's emotions get the best of him like she went after qinyue simply because of man pride the fact that she looked down on him made him feel bad or how after he acquired his body he directly said to the op goddess "you want a piece of this?" I think it's a negative and the novel will be probably more about collecting women rather than the story or the grind but i respect that and still with that many things can be done

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Not my cup of tea . After all when you write a novel/fanfic or whatever you need to have a contracdition/struggle to make a climax point somewhere in the story . When you go IM OP SINCE CHAP 1 route the story just lost an interisting point or a thing that make a reader feel like this novel is not bland after all who can be his opponent ? , can he be anything else other than MR.IMPOWERFUL ? , what is his point or goal ? or is it just gonna take a trash xian xia/chinese novel route where his opponent is a clown with no IQ existing just to faceslapping ? . I dont know i read like 10 chap and i dont see an interesting thing that make me want to continued reading this anymore .

Has a story but not a good one. It's your typical 'Webnovel' quality wish fulfillment. Writing wish fulfillment stories isn't bad but it's on how the writer executes and make it entertaining. Is the story entertaining? In my own opinion, no. It lacks dialogue and details and some common sense. The Mc is not even likeable and I can't feel emotions to him as a reader which is very important if you want to have more audience. I have a lot more to say but in the end I suggest you reading some veteran writers like crossedge, einlion, and other famous QQ authors (Webnovel is filled with 'kids' here so don't bother). If you want to earn $$ as a writer then learn from them.

It's a wish-fulfillment with an MC OP but kinda stupid, slice of life and collecting Harems with no specific purpose. It was a good novel and i really tried to keep going and shut my brain down but becoming SIMP is the worst thing that can ruin a novel for me and it's not my cup of tea ( imagine that you are very powerful and that you are afraid of your Harem... ) @Author, good luck for the future.

Tried to get through the existing chapters, but alas I am here writing a review. The main character feels like a teenager in a kindergarten ruining other kids sandcastles over and over for 70 chapters. Constant flexing with negative IQ and his comedic vocabulary being a 1 paged essay. It's your typical wish fulfilment fic with cheesy lines like "I, Your father" and One liners looking like : "Oh the arrogance". All in all, a good wish fulfilment fic, but it becomes very boring towards the end of the first arc, and to top it off, the main character is so obnoxious it's not even remotely pleasant to read. That said, Writing Quality is not bad, there's a few typos here and there, but not the point reading becomes an issue.

I don't really want to curse, so I will just simply say: it isn't great. I understand that writing isn't easy, but try to at least check things on wiki, because that could really improve quality.

the mc is Op but thoughtful and does not act without reason, he does not think with his lower part. he is calculating but not without emotion. He is not a bloodthirsty murderer but does not mind killing if necessary. He does however try bloodshed as much as possible as he finds he does not need to get his hands dirty. I'm French so the English Grammar is not my thing but if it is readable for me I think it is sufficiently readable for any normal English .😅

Really like the story, would have been better without the MC's little masochistic phase right before he left to the marvel verse, but I'm pretty sure it all got sorted out. [img=recommend]

a mess ! in the beginning it was interesting , but then the author I didn 't understand at all what he was doing who he thought he was for me , the golden superman would easily kill him , especially from comics . yes , there are a lot of characters who will kill him with one finger from where he has so much high - speed and in general , where is he in a hurry ? . how did he kill the laser dragon ? in short , he just got the strength and the roof went , it looks like he does not perceive reality .

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not the best but a good start for a newbie...I have hopes for your future writing...I have noticed your way of writing is interesting...I am surprised you haven't dropped this fic like the many others...consistency matters even if you right badly...take care author...Next time develop your story well instead of rushing to make MC op from the start

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Saya suka alur ceritanya dan sikap MC . Yang tidak mengumpulkan para gadis seperti pokemon yang dimilikinya... Meskipun mesum,tapi MC ini jujur dan merubah perilaku dan persepsi pemahaman tentang wanita yang dimilikinya.... Pokoknya bagus karyanya.. Saya dukung anda author sama 😂

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