They Become One

Two broken souls have come together to heal each other along with the crazy cute family. The sons are adorable and their grandparents are cherry on the top. A supportive family is what everyone wants and they have it. Looking forward to how they will handle life with with smart kids. The inner demons and the outer demons are now lurking around as I'm reading the chapters beyond 💯. I'm bad at reviewing but here it is *hides in the corner*

The flow of the story is excellent, but it's pretty slow. Haha, maybe it is because I like to know things quickly. The story is quite intriguing. I was looking forward to more chapters.

Not only is this a wonderful story and a must read, I also wanted to congratulate the author on their commitment to their craft! Keep inspiring us!!

I really enjoyed the descriptions here! The scenes felt powerful and the writing quality was quite nice. Not much else for me to say other than awesome work, and the bite sized chapter lengths are also great. Best of luck with your future writing!

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Cool This novel is really awesome. It hooked me from the start. The title itself catches you. The plot is great and interesting as it flows easily with every writing. Smooth understanding Great book, great work author

I really do love your story, it's really interesting, the plot, the characters, everything about this book is just simply amazing

I really enjoyed the start of this story. I added it to my library so I can keep reading. I like the whole child raising the parent vibe that I got from the opening chapter. I will be following this to see where it goes.

This is a good story, descriptive, I enjoy the plot setting and pace line to the story, it's drags you into every detail making it enjoyable Keep up the good work author

The plot of the book is quite interesting.... There are several elements you can explore. Two lonely souls united in a lovely relationship will make for a curious read. What I like most is the way they describe the characters and the background world. It's like a breeze that doesn't blow? it gives you a refreshing feeling. Best of luck... and good work dear author.

What a start !! I was really hooked by the first chapter. I enjoy reading stories with kids! The writing is good and easy to read! The description of the background is interesting too. The author took the time to set up the background of the character. The book has piqued my interest, I am really curious about how the relationship will develop between the main and their kids!! I will surely read it !!

Writing is great. The world background was done masterfully. Description is better than most webnovel stories I've read. I would count this against the writer but in some of the earlier chapters, the paragraphs could be split in half since some grow too long. It is more a stylistic preference than anything, but I think it really helps with readers. I notice you start off a bit slowly in this story, but I do the same myself in most cases. There are no major errors or flaws that I noticed. This put me on the line if I should do a full 5 stars or not, but I ended up one step away from it.

The book plot us quite interesting...thete is various elements that you can explore.Two lonely soul tied in a lovely relationship will be a curious read. What I like the most is the way describe the characters and the world background.Its like a don't breeze...giving you a refreshing feeling. Best of luck.....and great job dear author

Alright, hear me out. The first few chapters are a bit slow but every bit WORTH IT. The author places much care in starting out on the right foot - giving readers the time to get to know the core characters and understanding their personality/quirks. From what I've read so far, I could see this one day becoming it's own television drama! It's very well written and you can tell that the author has spent plenty of time doing prep-work before writing to ensure everything flows smoothly. And it does. If you haven't added this to your collection, you are missing out. Great job!!!

Author does a great job gathering the reader to get wrapped up into who the characters are. It's a slow burn so take your time and just relax. This book is definitely if you take your time and don't try to rush through. Love it keep going strong author. Oh and the first 13 chapters a mainly slice of life not romance so don't expect anything spicy early on!

The story is really interesting and the characters are also great. There's no boring moment in it. Nice story flow, good work author!!!!👍👍

The story has a smooth flow to it. The details and word structure are amazing. The main character will quickly pique your interest so keep reading!!!

What an amazing story l mist say...totally my type of story... I always like side characters and if it's a little kid than what else can l tell... It really become my one of the favourite characters... Author has described every detail very nicely by giving each pov... Really really great job and all the best for the next updates...l hope u can finish this book...

I gave you 5 stars for writing quality, story development and character design, because they were that good! I love the characters, especially the MC's son, I decided to name him 'sweetie' and you can't stop me :) The plot is good and overall, it's great! the only thing that you can change is paragraph spacing, because I'm reading with my phone and it's straining my eyes reading loong paragraphs, but otherwise, it's awesome!

The plot was interesting and I love the characters. The mcs son is so sweet from what I can tell. He’s my favorite character so far! The read was great! Your doing great, keep going!