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The Universe is Innately Just

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Every coin has two faces. Goodness is balanced by evil. Any concept has a counterpart. New Casablanca was the same. A fantastic city full of science and progress, yet such a dark side so dirty no one dares even talking about it. This is the hometown of a young man, Fell Pluck. Unfortunately, it was decided by the gods that he should be born in the slums of the city, the core, where you had to fight every day in the hope of living another one. "Choose your path, change your destiny, show your might. Unleash your will and show them your worth. I revealed to you the way of cultivation; the rest is up to you.." A. In the end, like a butterfly softly landing on a petal, a simple encounter can change the course of events... ################################# As many of you have noticed, UIJ has gone premium! To celebrate this, we're going to have triple daily release! You're in for quite the adventure with this novel, bear with me and I'll be sure to keep on working the quality of my work. "The Universe is Innately Just" is my first work on webnovel.com. Add me to your library if you enjoy the read! Comments and Power Stones help a lot. If you want to support me, do not hesitate to leave some! ############################ Support your author with a warm cup of coffee. :) https://ko-fi.com/lividedge

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Chapter 1A Weird Encounter

One night, in a narrow street in the slums of New Casablanca, a deafening sound was heard.

It was as if two hard objects crashed together, like a gun shot towards a metal object.

There weren't many people in that street, knowing very well the dangers it brought. The only people who stayed out this late are the ones who looked for a fight.

It was like this in the slums of New Casablanca.

Located in the middle of this astonishingly modern city, the slums seemed a little off. Although technology was still present, the place felt a little backwards. It was a grey area where police stay away from, even when this was where crime most prevailed. Here, it was the law of the jungle.

Simple. Messy.

But that night, it was different. Hearing such a loud sound in the streets of New Casablanca wasn't all too common.

The loud intrusive noise came from a simple fist landing on a body. It happened not too far from a little bar, Pig's Paw", where Fell Pluck worked.

Fell was a young rejected boy born in the slums. Up to this day, his life revolved around where he lived and the place where he worked. The rest of New Casablanca was pretty much unknown to him.

Even though the slums were very dangerous, hardening users were not very common. Most of them avoided making a show of their skills in public. Fell was completely astonished by the scene in front of him. It was the first time he was witnessing hardening.

Five seconds earlier, darkness had already taken over the sun in the streets of New Casablanca. Fell had just finished his night shift in the bar he works in. The only thing he had in mind was his bed.

He was still frowning, his stomach was nauseous from all the trash he had to take out, his fragile and frail frame was slowly seen advancing through the dark street.

His sluggish steps always avoiding the trash on the ground. Unfocused, he didn't even take a look at the endless sea of tags and graffiti spreading across the dam of steel that formed the street.

In front of him stood three thugs that surrounded the blue-haired man.

'They're acting again like they own the streets.", sighed a middle-aged man, his eyes looking way too calm in front of this seemingly normal scene.

"It's sad, but that's how life here in the core works. If you look the slightest bit weak, you'll get eaten without knowing why."

This kind of scene was all too normal for the inhabitants of the core.

The young man had a head full of long blue hair cascading on his shoulder, his eyes looking clear and vivid, his eyebrows drawn like a sword, a grin drawing on his clear face.

One of the thugs tried to sneak his right hand out of his sweater pocket. As his motion continued, you could see a wooden handle following his fingertips.

A serious expression appeared on the blue-haired man's face. In a burst of motion full of explosiveness, he took a step in while shifting his weights. His left elbow tensed and bent like a bow in the direction of his hips. The jab struck right on the thug's left shoulder and completely shattered it.

'Arghh!' a sharp and horrifying scream escaped the lips of the aggressor, his left shoulder completely ruined and crippled, leaving him in an intense state of pain.

He was close to losing consciousness.

A splash of blood, littered by torn clothes and flesh was just behind his body.

"Hardening!!!", screamed one of the old drunkards that endlessly wandered through New Casablanca's nightlife.

The crippled thug never imagined that simply by trying to take out his hatchet, the young and frail blue-haired boy would punish him instantly. Not even leaving him the chance to use his weapon.

In this narrow and dark street, Fell never would have thought that this scene would create a seed in his heart. Deep down Fell Pluck always craved for power, power to change his miserable life.

Power to finally grab a handle on his destiny.

As their companion was emitting a horrendous sound, the two other thugs grabbed the crippled body of their brother and started escaping with him. A mix of hate and fear clearly visible on their rough and twisted face.

"They will probably try to take revenge on him", thought the young Fell.

Fell approached the seemingly relaxed man, his back straight and tall like a mountain, a satisfied smile was drawn on his lips. He was weirdly looking at his clenched fist, pondering on unknown subjects.

'This blue-haired friend, you should start running for it, those kinds of scums are well known for their vendetta', kindly advised Pluck

'Yeah boy! you should quickly leave this place. Those bastards from the Darksun Gang will probably come back again! And this time it won't just be just a random Harry, Tom and Billy.'

Hearing this, the stranger slowly looked at Fell. He held a puzzled look on his face while Fell talked to him.

He didn't expect that in such a dangerous area that his family told him not to visit, he would encounter someone with such a clear and honest look.

"I kinda lost my way around those streets, do you mind showing me around?" said unhurriedly the blue-haired stranger.

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Volumen 1 :Prologue: Destiny Shift
Volumen 2 :Turning Earth Upside Down

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Only let me posted one review so... 1st; Why is it that every fcking cultivation novels are always the same... hi brother, lil sister, big brother etc IT MAKES NO SENSE. Especially in this story when its meant to be an evolved earth. We do NOT talk like that... talk like a normal person please. Other than this its an alright read, cant say much more as barely anything has happened Authors comment; Well, thanks for the review. As for the brother, lil sister, and big brother, in my hometown those terms are still quite used. And as the first city in the novel is based on where I'm actually from, then I don't find it out of place to use those terms. My comment after; Oh can understand then, for me where I live its very weird. I mean I can read stories that have it but cause ive read to many its got to the point It annoys me whenever I see it. Hopefully later on not everyone will use it ? As its still meant to be earth and there should be many languages if you get me ? Well anyway Ill carry on and see where it goes gl ! Final review xD Okay so carried on reading but when he meets 'wind' it gets confusing af. The english is terrible and very hard to follow, this has happened throughout the story but it was bearable however turned very prominent at this time. Also nothing against it but not into yaoi as im straight... when he meets wind it turns yaoi, with him calling mc big brother and blushing red. Not into that sort of thing but if you are then yeah carry on lel. This does need a tag for it thou, or atleast say has yaoi vibe at points or something. Also this is very slow pace, I don't mind slow pace but it has to move forward atleast. For the whole story now nothing has rly happened. I was hoping when he acc left the slums he would access the internet atleast.. learn something about the world. However the whole time he has been there hes done fck all. Another thing is the ai, it should be a lot more prominent in the story as itll be key for him knowing about the world and helping. However it seems like it's forgotten and is barely used. Only being used to explain something to help the mc. I mean he has used it like once ? why... Finally going back to this 'wind' character it makes zero sense for the mc to start training him... the mc isnt strong. He is still in the first level of both body, soul cultivation and hasnt even begun energy. So why is he helping someone train and follow him ? Also with the mc getting all his techniques from the messai fam other than his sword arts what tf is he gonna train the guy in ? All he knows are secrets he can't teach to outsiders... plus he knows fck all about cultivation. He only knows what he has been given, so he could teach maybe the basics but nothing else. But then again why is he waisting his time.. other than for the yaoi route. Then for awhile now he has been acting like some wise master at everything, being arrogant af. Its like the slums left no mark on him and is just used as a sob story. Its had no effect on the story so far, other than a sad backstory. Overall it seems like cultivation novel with loads of potential but ruined with loads of wholes turning it mediocre. Not meant to be a harsh review, just my honest thought on what ive read. It may be the authors first novel or even improve loads later on as the story goes on.

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