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I give this book a 4.6/5 rating as there was some mistakes in the first few chapters of the book. The plot is good and the way that the author describes the world building is mind blowing. However, I did not get the chance to see a much slower progress or a relevant description of some of the characters. For example, "He bumped into a young man, age 18, much smaller than him." I was taken aback by how the MC would know that the man he bumped into was age 18? He could've jus describe the young man's relevance to the story or describe the young man himself. However, please don't be too offended to this review and take it as a grain of salt. The author is great in other areas of the novel and I could see good potential with this. ^_^

WQ: 4/5 Reason: A few tweaks on the sound effect when something happened. Probably because I am used to other books just explaining what is happening other than the sound effects. SoU: 5/5 Reason: I am a binge reader and I love it when authors have many chaps to read on. SD: 5/5 Reason: Straight to the point and no hassle on who the readers should focus on. CD: 4/5 Reason: Just need a little bit more on the character design for the first three chaps. WB: 5/5 Reason: Superb background on the novel. Well planned and written. Overall: 4.6/5 Bear in mind that I only read the first three chapters of the book and that's what I based on my review. The novel is well thought of just a bit more on the execution of the dialogues and the narrative. Also check for some wall of text because not everyone are reading in laptop or desktop so the small amount of text that the author that won't be a problem, might cause one for readers that read on phones. Other than that, it is a good book. It's like a diamond in the rough. So good luck to the author!

i suddenly heard jinwoo's voice on that arise, ngl

WQ: 5/5 Reason: This book is a gem in the making, I ain't lying. The writing style is great, kinda like those traditional books you will see on the shelf of a bookstore. Will recom this one on someone I know will like it. Just a bit more on the synopsis, cuz it is definitely lacking. SoU: 5/5 Reason: I am a binge reader. And I really love seeing the amount of total chaps on a book and this one hit that mark. 28 chaps filled with goodness from start to finish. SD: 4/5 Reason: A bit slow, but who cares. It's still good. Only 4 because I need more info on some of the characters in the first three chaps. CD: 4/5 Reason: Same as the previous one. Character Design has little to no info about the characters like what they look like. I just know their eye color but none on their appearance and other things. WB: 5/5 Reason: The background is good, just a bit confusing on the first chapter. It felt like, it is not needed at all but maybe it is. Overall: 4.6/5 More info for the character please. I can't even imagine what Angel looks like or Pyr for that matter. Anything else is good. Good luck with your book!

WQ: 4/5 Reason: The writing quality is actually good compare to other authors, however, there is too much wall of text to the point that I chose to use the desktop in reading it other than my phone. The sentence were too long that I mostly forgot some of the details. SoU: 4/5 Reason: As you can see, it barely have chapters to read through, scheme through. I need more and hope the author updates more. SD: 4/5 Reason: Slow but good. But I need more for the story development. It's a bit simple and slow-burn. CD: 4/5 Reason: I still don't know what the MC looked like. WB: 5/5 Reason: It is describe but not well-enough. I think the author should also put more details into that. Overall: 4.2/5 Overall the novel is great. good concept, good plot, I just need more chaps to understand what it is about. A simple explanation of what is happening in her life won't do it, honestly.

I got be honest, this is a great book. I just noticed a few things and wanted to clear them out. I didn't mean to offend the author or something, I just noticed them. -- Writing Quality: 4/5 Reason: There were too much POV in just a chapter and the transitions are not that smooth. I got confused for a second and need to re-read the whole chapter to understand what was happening. SoU: 5/5 Reason: Author updates daily and that's a good thing. Especially for someone like me who loves to binge read books on this platform. SD: 5/5 Reason: Straight to the point type of books and then slowing it down till the end. Good start, not gonna lie. CD: 4/5 Reason: I still don't know and couldn't imagine what the characters look like. I didn't even know which one is the MC from the first chapter. Maybe a dumb reasoning since synopsis exist and I could just read from there, however, introducing the MC in the first chap would also be helpful. WB: 5/5 Reason: Great WB, just a little more tweaks on what the bg was. Or a little description on the surroundings will also be a good thing. Overall: 4.6/5 Reason: Great book. Good plot. Just a few things to edit here and there. The cover looks also cool so I will be hoping that when this book have more chapters, it will be a good one as well. -- Kudos to the author who wrote this. This looks like it will have a really good potential on being one of the greats. Good luck!

probs wore condom each time

Talk about trembling knees with much anticipation and an exciting even if the plot is repetitive with other books. You are the best author for these kinds of things and it's been a while since I read any of your books. Now, that I have so much time in my hands, I hope you will update daily for this one.. . . . . . or I will bother you for more

oh dw, sweetie.. she will call

who cares?