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Shadow slave: Dark souls system

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What is Shadow slave: Dark souls system

Lee la novela Shadow slave: Dark souls system escrita por el autor Otaku_Gamer_00007 publicada en WebNovel. A lonely men was sucked into shadow slave but he was not done getting fucked he also received the Dark souls system his luck was truly horrid there was no easy power for him Let see his journey in thi...

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A lonely men was sucked into shadow slave but he was not done getting fucked he also received the Dark souls system his luck was truly horrid there was no easy power for him Let see his journey in this hell scape will he survive or parish

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Otaku_Gamer_00007
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Hello there I am writing this as I have just read all of shadow slave and guess what the #1 in fanfic was a SS fic so I got motivated while thinking about what will happen if a character has the power to kill and make an army of dark souls bosses will anyone survive in ss universes how many can slave knight gale can kill and all I won't promise that I will keep writing but it was a fun concept I had in my mind I hope this time I reach 50 chapters that's the goal right now

ShaneFreak01
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Could improve on the commas and period also the spacing.Overall not bad.

krokrok007
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The whole idea is really good and pretty well thought out, but it has lot of gramatical mistakes and sometimes the author jumps randomly from one information to another without finishing the first one. everything expect the writing quaility is 5 stars. I would suggest to retrospectively read the chapters after yourself and edit them.

Anicky_Hen
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You actually need more credit... it was a nice read...

SirBobthe_1st
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Pls more sir (this is actually really entertaining keep up the good work and don’t drop this pls author)

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