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Romania 5th Hunter Team

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A young girl named Lydia, who is now in high school, 9th grade, was attacked last year by a werewolf and almost made her werewolf, but one guy, helps her to become a human-werewolf which means she can become a woman in the day, and the werewolf in the night to help her village and the city to avoid dangers.

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Chapter 1How I became a werewolf

It was just a night of September in Dobroț village, a village situated not far from the little city named Curtea de Argeș. Tonight I just dropped out of school because I had afternoon classes because I'm in eighth grade, and grades seven and eight have afternoon classes that last from twelve to six in the evening, which is eighteen if it's to be precise. I go to school in the city of Curtea de Argeș, which is almost four kilometers from the village where I have lived for a long time, and the school is still two kilometers from the city, so about six kilometers to school. And to travel from school to home I have two options, the first is to have the bus, which costs no more than three lei, which means almost a dollar in America, almost ninety cents in Europe, and seventy-five comma eighty-five yen in Japan. A rather low cost for some, but a high one in Romania. With this money, you can even buy a portion of ramen, pate, Leys chips, Chio, a dose of Coca-Cola, or something else that an eighth-grade child drinks with little money.

To get home I have to go to a dam, which is guarded by two dogs, Puta and Patroclus. I get along very well with these dogs because they have known me since I was a child when I came to this dam with my father to ride our bikes. I walk that dam quietly, I pass those dogs, who look at me for no more than three seconds, then go back to sleep. These dogs are certainly tired, or they are old, but anyway, dogs are dogs after all. I always thought that dogs attack people because they are hungry, but in fact, they bark at them as a sign that they are trying to protect themselves. Anyway, if there's a dog that bites me or wants to bite me, I give it a shot, and then I throw some food out of my backpack and run away as fast as I can. At least that's what my brother, Mircea, who now works as a shepherd and studies for the engineering faculty, taught me. I think the thing that taught me was just a joke, but today I was about to take it seriously when I met the one who changed my life as an eighth-grade girl.

After crossing the entire dam, I turn left and take an alley that is not paved at all but has traces of vehicles or cars, which means that there had been a lot of cars that passed and ignored the fact that this part is not asphalted and does not have a bar to lean on if you are drunk, and you take it there, or if you fight with a big one, and it decides to kill you by throwing you into the water from that dam, which is led to the plant hydroelectric plant on the outskirts of Curtea de Argeș.

I walk this road in no hurry just like I do almost every day when I leave school and I think about what my mother prepared for breakfast, I already think about the fact that my dear working mother in a shoe factory that has a ten-hour schedule would have time to cook chicken, but a girl who ate only a Boromir horn with vanilla and rum at school and drank a dose of Pepsi juice can dream of a large and delicious lasagna or apple pie.

I go down the slope and head for the house, which is no more than four houses away. I walk quietly to the house, and then I hear a kind of bang from behind me. I glance back, then notice some kind of big dog speeding towards me. That dog was not a dog but rather a werewolf, because he walked on two paws, wore a pair of torn jeans, had a torn T-shirt, and he had foam on his forehead and was running away from someone who had run him with a crossbow. I, who saw something like this for the first time, panicked and was scared of the place that led to a major change in my life. That werewolf did not bypass me but passed over me as if he were a beetle or an ant, and when he passed over me, he also scratched me with his long claws on my belly.

When that werewolf scratched me, I could see the blood starting to come out of my stomach, and to be honest, this image is not a good one. Now I felt like one of the sheep my brother cuts at Easter to use to create lamb snacks and food. Which in my opinion is not good if you are like me, a person who can not stand to eat animal meat.

Well, that werewolf passed over me and didn't stop walking. But the person who had run the werewolf, and who motioned for me to step aside, and I didn't listen, stops next to me. He notices the wound on my stomach, this person does something I never expected, spits on the wound with green-yellow saliva then continues his hunt without saying anything. If that spit wasn't some kind of healing serum, I'd certainly have yelled at him and used more swearing than my mother uses when arguing with my father on the phone.

After the saliva is doing her weird thing, I observed that the wound is starting to disappear and that feeling of pain, which is good but also disgusting because a man spat on my stomach ... Oh, alas! Now I'm going to be damned not to get married for the rest of my life. However, the man who spat at me did his job, I get up and run home to hide and try to forget that some kind of crossbowman hunts a werewolf, and everyone knows that werewolves don't exist in the world. ours, but they are a myth, a fantasy in fairy tales, or people disguised as people for fantastic movies ... That is, those people are playing an action movie and that werewolf is a human disguised. Yes! It makes perfect logic ... But what about the scratch and how the fact that a stranger spat on my belly.

After a few minutes of intense thinking and analyzing my belly in the mirror, I am deciding to let it go, and forget about that incident. I am going to the kitchen to see if my mother is there, but on my luck, she is not there. If he had, he would probably have asked me why I eat meat that is not made or the fact that I eat meat because the sure kind of meat I eat is chicken, oatmeal, or turkey Patel, the salamis I use for sandwiches and rarely burgers, but not a whole chicken that is taken from the freezer. I was trying to stop eating that chicken, but I couldn't, I don't know what the reason is, but someone responded to my behavior, and that someone was the hunter, who looked at me while I was pulling that frozen chicken. While I was a kid, that hunter didn't say anything and I didn't even notice him, but he told me that he followed me eating that chicken one day when I went on my first date ... which didn't happen very soon.

That man knocks on my window, I quickly look at that window and I go to the chick that was half-eaten to one side, and then I open the window terrified. That hunter didn't look disgusted, on the contrary, he looked around to make sure he wasn't seen by anyone and told me.

"Look! I am sorry for what I did, little girl. It was my fault and all, but I can ensure you there is nothing wrong with you."

"Really? Then can you explain... HOW THE HELL DID I EAT A CHICKEN BODY?!" I shout at that hunter who ruined my life, but also made it more interesting for me.

"Oh... Well..." says the hunter being nervous and scared. "How can I put this?... But... Look. You have become a werewolf."

"A, WHAT?"

"A werewolf, y' know... That huge animal who is full of hair on his body and all..."

I looked at my hands and I could see they are not with hair, or I have claws, but after a second, I started to scratch my neck, and there I could fell some hair growth. The hunter who was looking at me scared takes an injection, and he literally throws it into my arm. I don't know what was in that injection, but the next day, I woke up in my room and have no problem. No transformation. No hair on my special woman zones. And no instincts to eat raw meat, just a werewolf hand... Wait!? A werewolf hand?!

And that's how I became a werewolf who is protecting this city from a creature like that wild werewolf, ghosts, demons, criminals, and other things who could kill anyone, together with Jacob, the ghost who is my classmate in High school, Alexandra, a vampire who works in the library which is our team headquarters, Travis, an invisible man who is just working as a trucker to give us some income because hunting monsters and bringing justice is not helping that much in profit, and Hengar, the leader of 5th Hunters Team of Romania.

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I think everything in the story is quite interesting and there are some parts that are just... "whaa~t?" (In a good way whaa~t). I really liked the detail that went into it and all the conditions and stuff. But (because I am a nitpicker and is O.o) there are a quite a few grammar errors... ... o.o Firstly, verb tenses. The entire story is basically in first person which kind of (Ummmmmm) doesn't make a lot of sense (It's fine I guess, but there are some issues with the tenses). When people retell a story, even if they are retelling it as they go, it's in past tense because 'I was holding a cup', and 'I am holding a cup' is kind of different. Although there 100% can be exceptions, usually stories are written in past. In this case where it's completely in first person, it's okay (I think) because this is someone's thoughts. However, there are some moments where the verb tense switches and that's really honestly not okay because it either suggests that this event happened before. For instance: [I brush my teeth and wash my face. I went to sleep.] That is actually okay, but it's kind of confusing when it piles up. Generally, if we're explicating something that is sudden (Or for emphasis) it's in present, if not past. Like, I went to sleep, or I ate some bread. It's not really a mistake, but there are times where the switch is a bit awkward. Secondly, articles. I can't really tell if it's a typo or something because some of them really do look like typos, but there are moments where the wrong article is used or an article is missing or added in. Sometimes there's an 'a' instead of a 'the'. While I guess sometimes it isn't really a mistake and either could be used but in the context afterwards it's kind of weird when it doesn't match up with the following sentence. I really recommend getting someone or a tool like grammarly (I only know this and word, so I guess use either. Honestly, any grammar checking thing will work). It really starts to get slightly confusing in the long run and I would really honestly get something to check it. Thirdly, the plurals. Ummmmmmm (worries), sometimes the plurals and the article (^) doesn't match up. It's kind of hard to explain, so I'll just give an example: [There was an apples.] That happens a couple times, and I'm not really sure if it's a typo or a mistake or something else, but it is kind of an issue if the amount of something comes into play. So if there were two knives instead of one, using 'a' can be confusing as it refers to there being only one knife. Just in case, I would suggest using numbers as a safeguard, it might even prevent the problem from happening. Fourthly (... srry), this is kind of an opinion, but sometimes I think the description and character description especially could be better in a manner that isn't just state the condition, feeling, and move on. It's not really an issue I guess, it works (And I r e a l l y like the details) but it's kind of awkward sometimes. Since this is first person, I would really recommend freeing up the writing. In third person this would be somewhat borderline ok and not ok, but in first person, to make the writing really stand out, using thoughts and exclamations and strongly worded feelings (idk how to say it) really helps. First PoV is really good (and sometimes when writing third PoV it's hard to get around) in terms of expressing how the MC feels and all that mushy... stuff. I really recommend just sort of exploring first PoV since it's one of those kinds of PoV where the author is really free to do almost anything (that does not break the holy grammar laws that go 'no'). Even stuff like; [What? Is this guy really asking me this?] is okay and is actually good. I mean it's used sometimes, but for some of the description it could be mended into it. The thing about third person is that it's really limited as to how a character can be expressed... but first person is really really really just meant for that. Finally (O.o), I recommend splitting up your paragraphs. This isn't a grammar error or even an error, but sometimes people can be dissuaded by the look of a huge bulging paragraph that reminds them of the essay they have to write on Monday morning (which isn't me btw... just saying...). Splitting up paragraphs sometimes just makes it look cleaner. For instance having a 20 line paragraph then a 1 line paragraph/quotation is really just difficult to see unless it's for comedic (did I spell it right?) effect. Keeping it between 1 to 10ish (give 1 or 3) lines is okay and is feasible, but going all Karamazov and having a speech that is literally two pages (Microsoft effin word pages. I'm not even kidding it was this religious thing by this dude called father Zosima and while really cool... line by line by line...) long is a lot (I think the longest I saw was 16~?).

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