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The story is intriguing, the mystery at the start makes you curious about the characters, great writing.
Nice intro, makes me want to keep reading
I love the way the author took his time to explain the concept of the strings and how it worked. The story has a nice plot, the Mc is fierce, I like that. Nice work.
Thank you for reading. As regards to the questions you asked, im not sure what chapter you stopped at but i did try to g o back and explain certain details like how they met, why she was scared initially( not because she hates him but because she thought he was a ghost) and all of that. But I'll try to slow down and give more details in subsequent chapters. Thanks.