Rise Of The Last Dragon

I'm shameless and giving myself a 5-star. Trying to write a good novel for people to enjoy. Won't rush out chapters, I will think them through before release. Give me a review and let me know what you think.

I'm sorry I can't really give much of a review yet since there has only been like 6 chaps so far, but it seems to have a lot of potential and I hope you keep it going. However I have to please please beg you, for the love of everything holy and unholy, stop with the status check every sixth sentence. like seriously in the 4th actually chapter alone you showed the whole status 6 times if you must, just show the change and only that part like strength 1<2 or agility 5<7. at least don't show the whole status unless or after a significant change like multiple parameters change and/or multiple spells/status effects are gained. Please try to wait five or so chaps before showing the whole status because you take up most of your words in a chapter just in status screen text. Other than that rant the story seams to be ok so far. I think it only had a few grammatical errors but nothing to jaring and the story seams to have good potential. I truly do hope you keep it up and are able to go with this in a good way. but again please not souch status all the time 🥺🥺🥺

Exciting story, can't wait to read more, I love Lex his character is funny, and his interactions are so random. I can't wait to see what the author does next. it's a good read.

Good, can't wait for more, the story seems to be going in a good direction, I'm excited to see how the dragon aspect comes to. I can't wait for more chapters to be released, il be keeping an eye on this book. Defiantly worth reading, give it a go.

This first-person narrative is truly captivating, drawing the reader into the story and not allowing for any easy solutions for the protagonist to live a tranquil life. It is evident that the author will not be kind to his protagonist and instead construct him and force him to strive for power. I implore that this novel won't be discarded, as few novels on Webnovel have the first-person narrative.

I like it, it has a decent story as far as I can tell. the characters are good but the mother from his transmigration is horrible. I hope he doesn't forgive her.

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Really good, i love everything about it. cant wait until the author drops more chapters. i love the fml, you can feel her feelings through the page.

I really enjoyed the way you started your story but I also liked the system part at chap 2. I really like novels with systems and I enjoyed reading this one. Written well and engaging,

i just read 10 chapter so far, except from character desain everything seems good for me. Maybe its just early part of this novel, i will back again after i finish latest chapter.

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This is a very interesting novel it certainly has captivated my interest, I like the way you orchestrate the development of your main character, and also seeing the status window does give me quite the chuckle after seeing it per chapter~ Your novel is really great and I meant it! Even though the transmigration trope is overly used I found enjoyment in reading each chapter with an interest in what Lex has to go through. Keep up the hard work!

well certainly a interesting bk. i can c wat the author wants to do. im doing a similar thing in my book. i wud appricate if u cud check out my novel wen i upload it on friday nite.

Well what can i say, i've read many transmigration novels but this way is different. i've seen authors write about topics such as mental health, but this author most of done his homework to write his character.

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I LOVE THIS. this book is in my top 10. i love all off it, from the characters to the world we've seen so far. i love that his a dragon and how he growing. i recommend this to you to read.

Good Book. Good Story. Love The Characters. A Crazy MC. Good Release Times. Cant Wait For New Chapters. Hope The Author Doesn't Drop it. Love It!!! Just Read It, It's Worth It.

"The knowledge that we have brother scouts working in the same uniform, to the same ends, in the same way, in all corners of the Empire, cannot but make scouts proud of their brotherhood, and cannot fail to bring them into closer sympathy."