I'm shameless and giving myself a 5-star. Trying to write a good novel for people to enjoy. Won't rush out chapters, I will think them through before release. Give me a review and let me know what you think.

I'm sorry I can't really give much of a review yet since there has only been like 6 chaps so far, but it seems to have a lot of potential and I hope you keep it going. However I have to please please beg you, for the love of everything holy and unholy, stop with the status check every sixth sentence. like seriously in the 4th actually chapter alone you showed the whole status 6 times if you must, just show the change and only that part like strength 1<2 or agility 5<7. at least don't show the whole status unless or after a significant change like multiple parameters change and/or multiple spells/status effects are gained. Please try to wait five or so chaps before showing the whole status because you take up most of your words in a chapter just in status screen text. Other than that rant the story seams to be ok so far. I think it only had a few grammatical errors but nothing to jaring and the story seams to have good potential. I truly do hope you keep it up and are able to go with this in a good way. but again please not souch status all the time 🥺🥺🥺

Exciting story, can't wait to read more, I love Lex his character is funny, and his interactions are so random. I can't wait to see what the author does next. it's a good read.

Good, can't wait for more, the story seems to be going in a good direction, I'm excited to see how the dragon aspect comes to. I can't wait for more chapters to be released, il be keeping an eye on this book. Defiantly worth reading, give it a go.

This first-person narrative is truly captivating, drawing the reader into the story and not allowing for any easy solutions for the protagonist to live a tranquil life. It is evident that the author will not be kind to his protagonist and instead construct him and force him to strive for power. I implore that this novel won't be discarded, as few novels on Webnovel have the first-person narrative.

I like it, it has a decent story as far as I can tell. the characters are good but the mother from his transmigration is horrible. I hope he doesn't forgive her.

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Really good, i love everything about it. cant wait until the author drops more chapters. i love the fml, you can feel her feelings through the page.

I really enjoyed the way you started your story but I also liked the system part at chap 2. I really like novels with systems and I enjoyed reading this one. Written well and engaging,