Reincarnated as Draco's Twin To Dominate Hogwarts

The translation is full of garbage. Talk about ruining my immersion and this fic is up there. Clearly the author couldn't be bothered to check whether things lined up.

hello everyone if you want to read the i suggest you to go to mtl novel and search 'The Rise of Malfoy at Hogwarts' there is complete story to read

things just happen and theres not much personal relationships between characters, theres little to no extra world building and no new or original concepts, it's not terrible per say but I don't think it worth reading for me at least.

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREMWarning for those who don't like harem.The mc is so confused at what he wants to do, half the time he wants to power and influence but then allows Canon events that negatively affect him to still play out.He's an experienced and knowledgeable man with lots of maturity but then some how allows himself to be bullied by girls, give them anything and everything even his own techniques that he created to make himself powerful, they give him nothing and he also goes dumb whenever the story wants to add romance elements.

Thank you for bringing us this story....This story seems very interesting........ The ony problem I see is in the translation....... I hope the author would focus on the names as even some inconsequential names can interrupt the flow of reading and ruin the beautiful experience..........Foe example Guruni should be translated to Ancient Runes.......Please consider it....

So far everything in the story is good and the concept are interesting so the enjoyed the first two chapters and hope to see more of this story

Starting 5 whole chapter doesnt have have a single conversation or character interaction. It was all overview of this happened, that happened, they did this, they feel this etc... Not a single dialogue in all that time, I think thats a very poor way of writing,

A slight bit better than MTL, it seems the "author" ran a grammar tool without any proofreading/editing. The frequency of updates seem to be good though

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It was an interesting concept, but the author is very contradictory in terms of wanting to follow the plot. MC makes changes that should have changed the plot, but the author just gloss over them and follows the plot like a checklist with no reason. Not to mention, the translator skips certain things from the novel, which would have helped in character and world building, which makes people unable to immerse themselves into the novel. AND some tags are simply given to the novel as I specifically came to read a system novel that made me personally VERY DISAPPOINTED!!!

Story has stopped making sense, characters are acting outside of what they would…. Was well written in the beginning but just started to fall in quality and design.

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I tried to be generous, but there's a lot of issues I can't get past. 1.it was stated in the first chapter that Skyler the mc was an adult before being transmigrated/reincarnated but the oringal author is trying to disguise his clear attraction to children as on multiple occasions he has claimed that the twelve year old female characters are attractive and later writes that styler has mature fast as if he was a kid (which physically he is but mentally he's a grown man). 2. paragraphs repeat with a quick summary of what happened then loops and play the paragraph out with them actually speaking what was just brushed over, like a scrip that someone was editing left it in accidentally, so that not good it really takes you out of a scene. 3. midway through the first year ( which is brushed over fast) the mc states with full confidence that he's stronger than all but a few 7th years, let me rephrase that he (the main character) is stronger than soon to be adults at the age of eleven, now I love a good op mc, but come on even I thinks that's extremely rushed, with how he has 'mastered' ever spell in all course work and is so great that mcgonnagal even gets him to publish his transfiguration theory in a thesis study. ther are no intentional flaws. Every flaw that skyler has is entirely unintentional, and the original author doesn't see them as flaws, such as his blatant attraction to children. it'd be bearable is he wasnt a child groomer as even if he's op it's still kinda fun but every time he's around little girls, the author can't help themselves from making things skeevy and disgusting

All things considered it is a great work with an excitingly new immersive point of view.

I enjoyed the first chapters as it seemed to be fast tracking it to the actual start of the story, but then I realised that this was how the whole story was gonna be written like. Seems almost like a check list or someone telling you detailed spoilers for each chapter. There also no talking at all, just I did this, they are cool, I'm doing this.

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I haven't read it yet, but I will give it 5.0 even if it's bad. at least there's something to read to pass the time. Stories have been getting boring sometimes, and finding something that's an okay to read story is hard to come by all the time but will give it 50 chapters just to pass a few hours

the writer is not consistent with what he writes, he forgets what he is doing, he has a great lack of knowledge of the names/surnames of the characters, the story makes many time jumps that do not explain anything and in general creates power up of character so that immediately afterwards someone appears with a new enemy, a typical Chinese novel, aside, the new organization is totally unnecessary in the fancic, it's a little over 100 chapters in and I can't stand it anymore Besides, the novel is translated horribly, thanks for the 100 chapters but I can't take it anymore. In general, a 3.5 for the translator, mainly for bringing the novel, I didn't like either the novel or the translation but the attempt is appreciated, a 1 for the writer, the story he invented is horrible and look, with HP they have it easy.

This is a wonderful book it keeps you wondering what’s next

world building is kind of good, as author had added his own elements to the hp world, but character, and writing quality vise, it has much to be desired. the first 4 to 5 chapters had close to zero dialogue between characters, there wasn't any interaction between the characters it was a complete long monologue for the lead, it felt like a report of events, not a story, character dynamics were dull and uninteresting. for writing quality, there were some points that the author kept repeating, and there were sometimes that author explains something and goes on a tangent about another. the story has a generic plot, where the hyper competent lead chase after power, to protect himself in the dangerous world.