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Rebirth In The Cultivation World

Autor: Lord_lucky
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What is Rebirth In The Cultivation World

Lee la novela Rebirth In The Cultivation World escrita por el autor Lord_lucky publicada en WebNovel. Richard a man who had no ambitions died of a heart attack and was reborn in the cultivation world.Follow as our protagonist tries to grow stronger and tries to learn from the mistakes of the xianxia n...

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Richard a man who had no ambitions died of a heart attack and was reborn in the cultivation world. Follow as our protagonist tries to grow stronger and tries to learn from the mistakes of the xianxia novels he read. Warning: please be cautioned as my mc will be neutral in most situation as he is no hero and he won't care about most people and definitely won't a have a relationship beyond some flings.

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It has been a while since i wrote something and i hope i'll get some feedback to improve my writing. This story is something i wrote after reading a pretty large number of xianxia novel, i always hated the way those mcs go around collecting females like Pokemon and swinging their swords like retards at the first person who opens their mouth, creating a bigger problem and an enmity with a clan/sect, then repeats the same thing after 20 chapters. So yeah i'll be avoiding that.

DaoistNTOXVL
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Awesome Story! .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

IiILoVeMe
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I like the personality of the mc (not caring about anything but cultivation)👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

SIN3
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Wow, that's really amazing. It's the first time I've really come across this kind of farming novel. The novel about cultivation relates to the law that knowledge is power. Also the hero reminds me of Leylin's character from the novel Magus The Wizard's World, a hero eager to know. My only wish or advice if this is true is to make the viewer see the progress of the hero step by step, do not jump at the time, I know that this is difficult, but try as much as you can, because this way you will succeed in attracting the audience also. Try to make the cultivation system deep in the sense that there are many requirements for progress In cultivation, strict conditions and provisions do not make progress just absorbing qi, and the last thing that I hope to focus on is to make between one level and another great difference as big as heaven and earth, like even if they turn 1000 cultivators collecting qi fighting someone at the level of the institution, he will defeat them without Any fatigue or injury will make the narration strict rules. The viewer will also be excited when the hero reaches a new great level because the viewer will really feel that there is a difference between the levels. Also try to make farmers rare, mysterious and revered things that have their own rules. Give each level a right of respect, such as the level of the foundation institution. Make in Taif the number of people who reached this level approximately 100 people. This will give the viewer really the difficulty of farming, and every time the hero rises a new level was People like him are less. In short, give each level its status. Do not make everything fodder for the defender. If you want advice, do not care about it. Did you not like it, which is to add something like a chip from the novels of Magus, the Wizard's World, and similar novels that will be really interesting? Imagine with me "The farmer who seeks knowledge in a world "Mysterious and Dark Cultivation" and that's all I have. I hope it helped you. You are free to reject all my advice. Thank you for your time.

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I am really liking this novel. My favorite is the character of the main character. Great work so far. I hope mr. author keeps writing for a long time. Recommended 👍

iclo_5337
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Very good start, I like the personality of the mc and hope you will continue this book for a long time [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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