SIN3

Dear author, there are some dialogues where the characters speak without ".." Can you fix this? It is confusing and lowers the rating of the novel.

Hmmmm

It's better to have the main character blend into this world while maintaining some of their unique traits.

Can you delve deeper into enchantments and breathing/meditation techniques? For example: The protagonist used a meditation technique and successfully inscribed three magical symbols. I don’t want brief explanations like this—details add depth to the story. Also, can you write a plot about the protagonist’s family after the protagonist succeeds in reaching an official wizard? This is a scenario that no *WMW* fan has explored before. For example, the wizard could help the protagonist’s father with a small portion of **his** power, allowing him to climb the ranks and become a noble backed by villains. Additionally, the protagonist could accept students from their family—not out of care, but merely to grant them a chance to step into the world of sorcery.

NO

There is a problem I found, which is that we do not know the current time in which the events occur. Can you arrange how much time has passed since one of the events or the actual beginning of the novel?

Do you plan for a long life or immortality for Hardy, since Hardy has somewhat of a superpower, I think of a vampire scenario that I find very appropriate.

The disease of loving attention is truly terrifying

There is a better scenario for you, which is to control the army and military force in the shadows 《like the reality we live in》. It will save you a lot of time.

Please don't make Hardy a golden duck. lol