RE: Alternative - The Testament of Guisei Ketsubo

A very thoroughly written book! the author has written this book with so dedication and passion. It can be seen in the writing style...the characters, the storyline is so thoughtfully and well described...it has the magic to keep u hooked! It also has promising Pontential to go a long way. Kudos Author!

I love this book a lot. I love the character Greed you created. The synopsis was so capturing that it pulled me in. It was so interesting. I like the world you have built, and the colourful characters and novel you created.

Just loving the story from chapter 1 detailed characterisation and actions with a good and Interesting plot.It really has a lot of potential so pls do support the author

The plot is really great, I like it. I can see the passion the author has put into this work, thumbs up dear author. I am completely thrilled, goodluck with your subsequent updates.

This seems to be a promising story line. I wish you would upload more (sorry for being greedy) hehe. I now though how hard it is to write .~~ Keep it up author-sama~~

Very detailed creates a great mental image, I love it when protagonists are indifferent like this protagonist is, you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for more!

It's still very early on but I can tell that this novel has a lot of potential. its details are on point, its a dialogue realistic and its flow surreal. I'm really looking forward to the subsequent chapters to come, thanks for the novel!

ITS AMAZING! The author did a really good job describing things. The chapter is very long but I am not complaining, the author said chapters will come out each Friday so long chapter... I am fine with it! There is just a chapter but I can say the story is going to turn out great. The topic is okay but the cover isn't so special. Maybe put something catchy to attract more readers. cause THIS needs more attention.

As soon as you introduced the character "Greed", I knew something with the seven sins is going to be in the story. Your writing is amazing but I would suggest only one thing that reduce the size of your chapters. For new readers, this may be overwhelming to reas such a long chapter. Keep it up Author-san 🍀

It is a good story with very detailed descriptions. I also like the concept that associates with the 7 sins plus a MC with an arrogant attitude. Reading a long chapter destroyed my imagination but that's my problem, it is not yours. It is completely great. Keep up on doing your novel and Good luck on your progress.

It's a good story , although long but the characters and backgrounds can be imagined. I really liked it , can't wait for more....... I don't know what more to say , if you really need to find what's in the chapter then don't just read comments , go and read the chapter . You will like it .[img=update]

That's a good story-making ability you have there. I'll say it's a good one even though this chapter goes way too long unlike normal web novels usually do which caught me by surprise but hey that's like getting a bonus on chapter one.

Great story with vivid scenes. The prose is a little overwrought at times with a few grammar errors but flows well overall. The characters seem quite interesting so far and I'd love to read more. Keep up the good work!

I am the first to write a review✌😊 The synopsis leave much to be desired, it hinted a few details here and there but I did not really get much on what the novel is all about. The first chapter was intense 🔥 🔥. Something about the details the way it showed rather than told. The fear, the suspense, the thrill plus the teasing because I really want to know who are the villains. The main character Greed is looking good so far, playful arrogance huh, although I am sure the other side won't see it as that. All in all a good read. Worth camping in the tent

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😎😎😎 an intriguing story, that's for sure. this story might not be my cup of tea, but, with smooth writing style and interesting plotline, i ignored it and had read the book until the end. keep up the good work, author.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Excellent story, beautifully written. We are transported to another world like no other and the only thing we can do is hold on tight in this action packed, wild journey!

As of this review, I have read 5 chapters. Specific Rating: 5 out of 5 star This story is amazing. The character design and writing quality are sublime. I can tell the author put a lot of work crafting everything, from the world-building to the characters. I did find it difficult to read at times, and the first chapter was so long it felt as if it lasted an hour, but other than that, the writing was great. One thing that saddened me was the stability of updates. The author has said that they will update every Friday, which is definitely a bit long. It's a shame that we have to wait this long for such a great book. However, if waiting one week is the price to pay to get such quality, then I'm up for it. Other than that, all I have to say is: "Good job, author!"

A really well-put-together story, it has the potential to go places and I like the way the author explains the details, it's very bright and realistic, keep up the good work, I will for a sure tune around for upcoming chapters.