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Erxian_Lv13yr
2021-07-02 13:14

As of this review, I have read 5 chapters. Specific Rating: 5 out of 5 star This story is amazing. The character design and writing quality are sublime. I can tell the author put a lot of work crafting everything, from the world-building to the characters. I did find it difficult to read at times, and the first chapter was so long it felt as if it lasted an hour, but other than that, the writing was great. One thing that saddened me was the stability of updates. The author has said that they will update every Friday, which is definitely a bit long. It's a shame that we have to wait this long for such a great book. However, if waiting one week is the price to pay to get such quality, then I'm up for it. Other than that, all I have to say is: "Good job, author!"

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foxyash
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A very thoroughly written book! the author has written this book with so dedication and passion. It can be seen in the writing style...the characters, the storyline is so thoughtfully and well described...it has the magic to keep u hooked! It also has promising Pontential to go a long way. Kudos Author!

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steph_pesi
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I love this book a lot. I love the character Greed you created. The synopsis was so capturing that it pulled me in. It was so interesting. I like the world you have built, and the colourful characters and novel you created.

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Erivva
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Just loving the story from chapter 1 detailed characterisation and actions with a good and Interesting plot.It really has a lot of potential so pls do support the author

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karis_wealthy
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The plot is really great, I like it. I can see the passion the author has put into this work, thumbs up dear author. I am completely thrilled, goodluck with your subsequent updates.

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Prikkrang
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This seems to be a promising story line. I wish you would upload more (sorry for being greedy) hehe. I now though how hard it is to write .~~ Keep it up author-sama~~

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Yasuzenn
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Very detailed creates a great mental image, I love it when protagonists are indifferent like this protagonist is, you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for more!

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Cloudthief
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It's still very early on but I can tell that this novel has a lot of potential. its details are on point, its a dialogue realistic and its flow surreal. I'm really looking forward to the subsequent chapters to come, thanks for the novel!

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dead_oop
dead_oopLv1

ITS AMAZING! The author did a really good job describing things. The chapter is very long but I am not complaining, the author said chapters will come out each Friday so long chapter... I am fine with it! There is just a chapter but I can say the story is going to turn out great. The topic is okay but the cover isn't so special. Maybe put something catchy to attract more readers. cause THIS needs more attention.

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lon_okami
lon_okamiLv2

As soon as you introduced the character "Greed", I knew something with the seven sins is going to be in the story. Your writing is amazing but I would suggest only one thing that reduce the size of your chapters. For new readers, this may be overwhelming to reas such a long chapter. Keep it up Author-san 🍀

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Seishi_
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It is a good story with very detailed descriptions. I also like the concept that associates with the 7 sins plus a MC with an arrogant attitude. Reading a long chapter destroyed my imagination but that's my problem, it is not yours. It is completely great. Keep up on doing your novel and Good luck on your progress.

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