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Our First Love is Everlasting!

Elizabeth Lockhart has grown up under strict training, doing all kinds of missions. She got engaged to the child with beautiful sky-blue eyes, Vincent Greenwood. They didn't meet each other often, and when they meet and want to be together, is too late... She died in his arms, but when she opened her eyes once again, she was in her room...10 years before her death. *** He doesn't want to waste too much time, "Our wedding will be on your 21st birthday." She agrees with it, but... "Isn't in eight months? Don't you think that the time is too short?" He looks at her eagerly, with passion, "Not at all, I need my wedding night!" Poor him, he has been celibate for... only he knows how long... After so many hardships, waiting for their family reunion, they can hold their wedding. He must have the wedding night that he has longed for... "I must keep my promise!" She will make it possible for their wedding to take place. "Nothing must happen this day." She said to herself as she saw the beautiful, golden-eyed lady in front of the mirror. Everyone around them, "What's the rush to get married?" They both answer in unison, "We've already lost ten years without being together." Could they have a peaceful wedding despite so many enemies around? How long will it take them to reach the aisle? >>>> *Author Notes: This is my first novel. Hope that is to your liking! English is not my main language. (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ The Editions for grammatical mistakes are ongoing... >>>The purpose of volume 1 is to get a better understanding of certain characters who will assist our FL and ML in the future. Because the rebirth story starts in volume 2, you can skip volume 1 and go straight into chapter 24. And thanks for reading! *Any resemblance with places, names, and others to reality is pure coincidence.* Wanna buy a cup of coffee for this poor author? > https://ko-fi.com/blueflame_mecc Join me in Discord: > https://discord.gg/nx92VWBPTv Disclaimer: Cover doesn't belong to me, credit's to the artist and Co. (I just edited...)

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Behind The Scenes

Author: Here is the shameless author. I've noticed that almost nobody reads my story, and if you have arrived here, I would like to thank you very much for your support, sometimes I know as readers we don't comment in all the chapters but, in many occasions, it is good to do it to motivate the author to put more effort in the story, and if you comment, if you would like something to happen or to eliminate a character, it is also acceptable, all constructive criticism, contribution is exquisitely welcome.

Beth: Yes, that's right, I know my participation hasn't been the best of the best, but I want to tell you I will improve, and more scenes with brother Vince will come out. (She blushes shyly like a ripe cherry tomato). Also, I think I will have new friends and enemies. By the way, my family history is a bit, how to say, depressing and sorrowful, because there are a lot of secrets about my birth and...

Author: STOP!!! Beth no spoilers, you realize what you were going to say to the readers... (turning red in anger giving her a killer look).

Beth: I... I... I, I just wanted to... (cries for being wronged).

Vince: What's wrong? (cold with a frown on his face, about to explode with anger) Beth, who made you cry?

Beth: No... It's not the author's fault, it's because I was going to give spoilers to the readers... buhuhu (still crying).

Vince: (who had a vein bulging in his forehead) Author, what's your excuse? Spoiler? You want me to give them a better spoiler, for making my precious fiancée cry? (throwing a look more murderous than the murderer himself)

Author: N... No, that's unnecessary. (shaking on his legs from fear of that look).

Creepy Chef: Oh, young master Vince, are you bulling my author? Hmm? (Pulling out the kitchen knife)

Vince: (gave him muscle tick on his eyelid, realizing that of the man in front of him was dangerous, flinching at the sight of that kitchen knife) Humph, author, don't make Beth cry again. (he turned around hugged Beth by the shoulders and took her away)

Author: Phew, that was a close call to the afterlife.

Creepy Chef: Oh, my dear author, why changed my name? Hmm? (raising an eyebrow)

Author: No! My dear Chef. My beloved Antonio Barbarossa. Dearest dear! You know, I have to get on with the plot of the second volume, Arrivederci (she ran off with smoke on her feet).

Chef Barbarossa: Oh, my appearance bulling you will no longer be possible, TSK. Well, my dear readers, I hope you enjoyed the first volume, otherwise... (sharpening kitchen knives with a mischievous smile) I hone my kitchen knife for your…. (making a horizontal gesture on his neck with the kitchen knife) See you soon! Look forward to the second volume! Adieu!

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Author: Gone? Sigh. That's good, I'm still scared of his smile and even more when he pulls out the kitchen knifes, you do not know what he can do. Just thinking about it gives me the creeps, but if I keep talking about him, he'll figure it out, I don't know how but, he will....

Readers: If you don't know how, it will be worse for us... didn't you create him that way? (Rolling their eyes)

Author: Well, that's all for now, be careful of that 'rival' that appeared in these last chapters. He is dangerous.

Author: I-

(BAM, door opens abruptly, startling the author)

'Rival': Oh, author I think you were talking about me?

Author: (looking around in panic) where's that creepy chef when you need him....

'Rival': Hmm (sadistic, psychopathic look).

Author: Dear readers, I'm scared, so let's end this here okay? I wanted to have more time to chat with you, but it's not possible.

Lucius Gustaf: Hmm, bullying the author? Keep it up, and you won't have any more scenes in the story.

Author (saw the light of hope, almost jumped in and hugged his tight) Yes, that's right. No bullying the author Darling. (nodding her head several times like a chick eating his corn).

Lucius Gustaf: Chuckle

'Rival': Dare you to leave me without scenes, and worse without scenes with Beth! (Pulling out his revolver, demonstrating that he's armed).

Lucius Gustaf: (raising an eyebrow) still not leaving?

Author: Yes, shoo, shoo... (making a hand gesture running him off).

'Rival': because he could not stand that gray eyes anymore, he turned around and left angrily.

Author: Thanks, handsome!

Lucius Gustaf: No problem, I only have a favor to ask… (hesitating)

Author: For you handsome, I can give you the sky! Tell me!! (with star eyes looking at him with expectations)

Lucius Gustaf: Don't leave without a wife! I don't want to eat too much dog food and don't have anyone to see me eat it.

Author: (stared blankly at Lucius) O... Okay, if is that what you want.

Lucius Gustaf: (left with a satisfying smile on his face)

Author: (Speechless)

Well, my darlings, I got to go, and work in the second volume! See you soon, stay tuned for more fun! (leaving.... stops..... return....)

Guys, did, did you... Did you see the way Beth was crying like if I truly bully her? My god! When did she turn in a white lotus or a green tea b***? I have to make some corrections in her character, or was it she saw that Vincent was coming?

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SHOCK

Well, she can act spoiled just for him! She deserves it. All what she went through, sigh! I won't tell you much!

Bye Bye!

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Beth's Master: So, I didn't have scenes here either?

???? 1: Don't get mad, look at me... My name is still on '???? 1'

Beth's Master: Who are you??

???? 1: You will know it soon!

???? 2: Don't get to cocky here bro!

???? 3: That's right, better go before the author comes back again and see us here, she won't give us time to show ourselves.

Beth's Master: ...

???? 1: ...

???? 2: ...

???? 3: Ups...

(All of them running away!)

Sorry, I said that this chapter will be the beginig of the Volume 2, but I wanted to give a lttle space for other characters, like the ones who show themselves at the end.

Did you like this Behind the scenes? Will you like more in the future chapters? if you like it tell me, if you don't I won't write them!

Thanks for reading my dearest! Love you!

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