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Naruto: Time Control

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Reborn as Kakashi's older brother with the power to control time. I do this translation just for pleasure https://www.patreon.com/inferno303

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Chapter 1Chapter 1: Popularity is also annoying (Edited V2.0)

Konoha.

Ninja Academy.

In one of the classrooms, the teacher was standing with a form.

"Next, Yeruashi Hatake."

Along with the teacher's voice, a short silver-haired boy was seen walking very calmly towards the podium, and with a quick movement he performed several hand seals.

Auge!

With the appearance of a cloud of white smoke, an almost perfect copy of the young man appeared to his left, who looked and behaved almost identically to him.

This scene made almost every girl in the class exclaim, but this was not only due to the successful application of Bunshin no Jutsu, but also because Yeruashi's attractiveness was one of the best in the class.

"95 points, not bad."

The teacher discreetly nodded to Yeruashi and recorded the result.

Due to the near perfect application of Jutsu on his first attempt, Yeruashi's score was in the top ten of the class, but the teacher's eyes did not show much praise....

The reason for his attitude was simple, Yeruashi had a younger brother named Kakashi, who applied for early graduation from the Ninja Academy at the age of five, and at the age of six was promoted to Chuunin. This incredibly talented young ninja, in the eyes of others, is a worthy heir to the will of the famous "White Fang of Konoha".

Compared to his younger brother, Yeruashi was completely normal.

Although he was one of the top students in his class and got good grades in everything, he was still studying at the Ninja Academy at the age of eight and had never shown the same amazing talent as Kakashi.

Although the teacher made a reserved comment about Yeruashi's result, the shouts of admiration and praise from the girls were already spreading throughout the class.

"Yeruashi, well done!"

"95 points, you're number one, aren't you?"

Many girls looked at Yeruashi with flashing eyes.

Having traveled to this world, Yeruashi had inherited the bloodline of Sakumo Hatake, Yeruashi didn't look much different from kakashi, but he didn't wear a mask and wasn't as indifferent compared to his younger brother, so he was almost always the center of attention of the girls in his class.

Yeruashi returned to his seat, smiled at Kurenai, who was next to him, and said, "There's nothing difficult about using Bunshin no Jutsu, you just need to concentrate properly."

Yeruashi had come to this world two years ago, becoming Kakashi's older brother, but he came too late, he simply didn't have the ability to stop the suicide of Kakashi's father and his father, the "White Fang of Konoha", Sakumo Hatake.

This incident had a great impact on Kakashi, and less than a month later, he applied for early graduation from the Ninja Academy.

As a son who inherited the bloodline of the White Fang of Konoha, Yeruashi was certainly not inferior to Kakashi in talent, but he considered early graduation from the Ninja Academy a stupid act.

Why?!

Isn't it better to stay at the Ninja Academy and get stronger little by little?

Besides, at this moment it was the forty-second year since the founding of Konoha, and if memory served him correctly, next year the Third Ninja World War would begin, and the following period could be described as one of turmoil for the entire ninja world.

If it were a time of peace, applying for early graduation and becoming Genin would not be a big deal, but during these turbulent pre-war times, even Genin were often on dangerous missions of a combative nature.

Kakashi's early graduation at the age of five and his promotion to the rank of Chuunin at the age of six may seem amazing and remarkable, but to Yeruashi it was pure "recklessness", not to mention that the danger of the missions will increase after advancing to Chuunin rank, but simply revealing such an amazing talent will definitely attract attention from the enemy villages.

These are turbulent times.

Kirigakure, Kumogakure, Iwagakure and Sunagakure... Almost all the Great Ninja Villages were targeting Konoha, and a genius like Kakashi is certainly bound to be noticed by them, and not in a good way.

"With Jounin level strength, there would be nothing wrong with applying for early graduation..."

Yeruashi muttered in his mind.

Unfortunately, he didn't have the strength of a Jounin, and although Yeruashi was capable of defeating his younger brother, Kakashi, at best, he has the strength of an elite Chuunin, and that was due to his special ability.

After all, at the age of eight, his body was still in the developmental stage and for a ninja it is not until after the age of sixteen that he has really passed the developmental stage and reached a stable stage.

By the way.

It's worth talking about the special ability he possesses.

It was something he discovered by accident after crossing into this world, a huge ephemeral clock existed in his mind and he could see it every time he closed his eyes.

It is similar to the clock of the "Emperor of Time", Kurumi Tokisaki, from the anime Date a Live, but different in terms of capabilities and strength, he did not have the ability to influence the past or stop time, except that the only ability he had unlocked so far was the acceleration of time.

This was similar to one of Emiya Kiritsugu's innate time control abilities from the anime Fate / Zero.

Personal Time Acceleration.

In a state of time acceleration, all his movements would become faster, including his melee attacks, creation of hand seals, etc., which is one of the reasons for his superiority over kakashi.

He could now use up to double time acceleration, which meant he would be twice as fast as normal in his time accelerated state.

While Yeruashi was lost in his thoughts, a girl sitting in the front row turned her head and said to Yeruashi with slightly flushed cheeks, ".... Yeruashi, I brought two bento today, how about eating them together later?"

This comment immediately aroused the anger of the other girls sitting nearby, and even Kurenai, who was sitting next to Yeruashi, looked at that girl, and tension instantly filled the room.

Seeing this, Yeruashi shook his head helplessly.

Now he was beginning to understand why Kakashi had to wear a mask, maybe it was due to similar situations... but it also had to do with the fact that the other guys in the class weren't cute enough.

The cast of this class was pretty good, with one of the bosses behind the scenes of the anime, Uchiha Obito, Rin Nohara, Yuhi Kurenai, Sarutobi Asuma and several other characters present in the anime. But Asuma, Kurenai and the others didn't show anything outstanding, and Obito was just awful.

Uchiha Itachi would not be entering the Ninja Academy soon, Uchiha Shisui was in the Ninja Academy, but he was two years below him, not in the same class, so they had almost no chance to train.

If Kakashi hadn't graduated early, it might have taken away some of his popularity.

Ugh!

Too much popularity is kind of distressing.

Yeruashi sighed in his mind, he had dreamed of being in this same situation before, but once experienced, he could only give a sad sigh, but then again, the precocity of the girls in the Naruto world is too outrageous.

Just look at those girls who started fighting and being jealous at the age of eight or nine to understand.

Compared to girls, boys are just as precocious.

The boys watched the scene unfolding around Yeruashi with envy, their eyes flashing with anger, and some clenched their fists tightly.

"That bastard..."

"He's obnoxious, I really want to beat him up."

"But you can't beat him, can you?"

"Shut up!"

Among the children who clenched their fists and gnashed their teeth was Uchiha Obito, as Nohara Rin was one of the girls gathered around Yeruashi.

Yeruashi didn't care much about the students in the class, only two of them could attract his attention, Uchiha Obito and Might Guy.... But he could only care about the distorted Uchiha Obito, and now this guy was basically harmless, he could easily be mistaken for a side character.

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The early chapters of this fanfic, show promise with an acceptable level of translation quality. However, this initial promise quickly deteriorates as the translation becomes increasingly sloppy. Pronouns are frequently mishandled, and the inconsistency in naming conventions leads to confusion. Jutsus, Techniques and entire Concepts are suddenly referred to by new names without any clear reason, which disrupts the reading experience and pulls the reader out of the narrative. From the outset, it is clear that this story is a wish-fulfillment fantasy. The protagonist is overwhelmingly powerful, facing little to no real risk throughout the narrative. The female characters in the side-cast seem to exist solely to extol his virtues, constantly praising his abilities and reinforcing his superiority. As the story progresses into war and the protagonist's extraordinary powers are showcased, any potential for tension evaporates. Every battle he enters is effortlessly won, making the outcomes predictable and stripping away any sense of suspense or danger. The concept of using "Time" as the protagonist's power is intriguing and holds significant potential. However, the execution falls flat as the character's abilities quickly render him omnipotent. This rapid escalation of power diminishes the excitement and complexity that a more balanced approach could have offered. It’s a missed opportunity to explore the intricacies and limitations of time manipulation, which could have added depth and richness to the story. The battles, a crucial element in any action-packed narrative, are disappointingly bland and monotonous. The lack of strategic thinking and clever use of jutsu leaves much to be desired. Fights are resolved with brute force and speed rather than ingenuity, resulting in a series of predictable and uninspiring confrontations. The absence of strategic depth in these battles fails to capture the essence of what makes combat in Naruto so engaging. It is noted in other reviews that the protagonist eventually ventures into other universes. However, having not reached that point in the story myself, I cannot speak to the quality or impact of these cross-universe adventures. This aspect could potentially add a new layer to the narrative, but given the issues present in the earlier parts of the story, I have a lot of skepticism about its execution.

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