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inferno3033 years agoPublicado porhttps://www.webnovel.com/book/naruto-time-control_22045166906217305 goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddd
- inferno3034 years agorespondió a DreamCreator
Yes, by using time acceleration, the protagonist consumes his lifespan, or to put it another way, by using time acceleration he grows rapidly and that results in the protagonist accelerating his death date, but I read from the original author up to chapter 300 and the protagonist only got to be almost 20 years old, plus the lifespan problem will be solved quickly when he travels to other worlds.
- inferno3034 years agorespondió a Sham_Pain
I never said that the novel was mine, and unfortunately for me, I am not copying it from another author, I am Spanish and I copy the novel in a pdf in Spanish and translate it with a translator.
- inferno3034 years agorespondió a Poseidon_1_
So far, the only thing that is known is that his body does age, as for his soul I have no idea, since nothing is said about it. But the aging problem will be solved eventually.
- inferno3034 years agorespondió a Cerdo_Agridulce
lo siento, pero esta novela la utilizo como borrador para la novela en ingles, por lo que anteriormente no me moleste en corregir los scripts y los errores, pero desde tu comentario anterior comenzó a arreglar lentamente los errores y a borrar los scripts de los primeros capítulos publicados.
- inferno3034 years agorespondió a Cerdo_Agridulce
si, gracias, estoy arreglando todos los errores en los primeros capítulos, muchas gracias por el aviso
- inferno3034 years agorespondió a Horatio_Prout_5098
Error solved.
Este capítulo ha sido eliminado. - inferno3034 years agorespondió a medium_is_premium
Yes
Este capítulo ha sido eliminado. - inferno3034 years agorespondió a DaoofTheVoid
I started translating and editing this novel to improve my penmanship, as for the novel, I translate it with translator from the original author, then I edit it as I think it looks good and publish it. The only bad thing is that it takes me a lot of time to edit the translation I get from the original author's site. So I don't know if what I do can be considered a copy or not.
- inferno3034 years agorespondió a iori143
I think so. what the prota does is to imbue the nature of lightning into the sword, thus improving its attack power and penetration, I also read that the mere contact with the Chidori can severely damage his enemies and immobilize his opponent.
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