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The_Jeffinator

The_Jeffinator

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I read probably way too much but my standards are also exacting so if I complained about your book, I stand by my opinion because I also probably gave you a break down on why I didn't like it.

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    20 ----> Echo (5%) [Double roll 20 required to get it.]
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    I hope he tests this on jet. that would be funny.

    [Monarch Beyond the Grave] Attribute Description: "Even among the dead there is a hierarchy. You are the monarch of the living dead. All undead follow your commands without question. Hostile undead are suppressed innately by the nature of you regal presence."
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    protagonist probably didn't have to so much as collect it all himself. a hidden ancestor probably crawled out of the woods and left these trifles for the prince of his auspicious clan.

    The cracked stone I saw turned out to be a cracked Odd Keystone, the branch was in fact a (hale) branch belonging to a Decamillennial tree. In addition to that, there was a husk of a decamillennial tree core belonging to the same tree, four Leaf Stones, two Dusk Stones, a Big Root, a Comet Shard, a bunch of Energy Roots, and a freaking Mega Stone that turned out to be a Sceptilite. This was a veritable treasure pile and I could not believe that Phantump had managed to get his hands on a Sceptilite.
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    or the age of the dead child is accounted for

    Honestly, a 14-year-old wild Pokemon with blue potential should have reached the (high) bronze stage at least by living a normal wildlife with the occasional battles that came with having to fend/take care of oneself.  Unless of course, it was part of a larger group and thus did not get exposed to any danger at all. Whether the older group members would allow that was another matter.
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    respondió a lnsomniac_

    obito has the short range eye, Kakashi has the long range eye.

    -The Gedo Mazo statue can't be summoned if you don't have a genuine Rinnegan, otherwise, I might check what's going on -Obito looked at the clouds in the sky for a moment and returned his gaze to black Zetsu -I have a bad feeling about it. Since you've lost contact, let's go in person to see what's going on. With our speed, it's only two days of travel. Even if it's just a missed alarm, we can take advantage of the trip to observe the attack on Konoha.
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    Here's the problem, I really don't get why she trusts counsel so much. Dude is a walking red flag and honestly, at this point I'm almost sure he's working for the tyrant. Man has completely disregarded the woman he claims to love far too many times, started a rebellion with her as a figurehead, and has a really suspicious relationship with pen. Not to mention the ominous warning about being used as a figurehead!, from a guy who was sure Counsel would have turned him in to the queen to be executed despite counsel himself having far less of an excuse for surviving that expedition. maybe I'm reading too much into this but I think noble(by extension brenna) might have Stockholm syndrome.

    Overcome with emotion, he wrapped Noble in a bear hug and lifted her farther off the ground.
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    respondió a CellsAutisticBro

    Many roots are staples in almost every culture of refined cuisine. I'm sure it'll work out.

    "Looks like the nobles will be able to enjoy an extra dish tonight.
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    Dropping pure gold on us in this chapter! Perfect timing for an awesome twist.

    '...Sarai?' 
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    For some reason, I thought she already guessed she was a saint. After all, there Were fallen among the tyrants forces, and tyrants can't control nightmare creatures the same rank or class as them(or at least I thought so). Therefore shouldn't it have been a corrupted and the queen in comparison a saint?

    'A Master or a Saint! Am I fighting a SAINT?!" Noble could hardly believe her luck.
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    nevermind, I realized she had interim tutors when sunny left to ascend

    Ch 89 Everything is Better with Ice Cream
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    I'm confused... I thought she was training with sunny by now

    Ch 89 Everything is Better with Ice Cream
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    I did this as a kid. Kinda fun/ ticklish with milk or water, but pray to whatever lord you have to save you if you try anything carbonated, because that experience was like a thousand ants crawling and chewing their way through your nostrils. You can't do it without choking half to death, stabbing yourself with the straw, and crying. Even if you can hold down the tears, your eyes would water until you had to wipe them..

    If one could fit an entire biscuit in his mouth, the other naturally had to fit two. It was all fun and games until Brock got the idea to try and drink the juice through his nose with a straw. While he ended up being mildly successful, the gross factor was too much for their mother. 
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    Aren't hallows supposed be rare because their bodies do not always die when they die in the dream realm but most of the time they do? Am I just confused?

     Those who made it out and back to the real world would become Awakened like herself. Those who didn't…those who perished would become hollow.
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    Not really but, I'm getting kinda upset that rain's parents are such pushovers when it comes to her yet know intimately how horrible the world is. It has come to my dawning attention that both parents have high level access to sources of information that should make them train their kids and take that training super seriously. Yet they are very avant-garde about rain having a tutor they have no reason to believe is any more talented than noble herself is. There's protecting one's child, and then there's failing to prepare their child. Of course, we have the honor of knowing she's in good hands, and this is in no way a critique of the work so far, the work has been phenomenal, however, her parents' attitude gives me secondhand worry for rain from an entirely different perspective. Just my feelings after seeing her dealing with something so serious here she goes to all lengths she reasonably can to avoid exposing herself, yet I don't see any sign of taking her daughters education in these matters seriously.

    Ch 25 Don't Break the Seer
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    Second line, 13th paragraph from the bottom says something along the lines of "Only when she needs to pick something up and touch the floor to retrieve what was lost does she allow a moment of pain" or something like that.

    "Don't worry, sweetheart. Allow me." Even as Noble spoke, the five small ramekins floated from the low counter through the air and made their way next to each bowl.
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    respondió a The_Jeffinator

    only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up off the floor...

    Since then, the brunette had learned to hover within a millimeter or less of the ground and move just like everyone else. Only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up and touch the floor did Noble allow herself the briefest moment of excruciating pain to retrieve what was lost.
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    Here it is.

    Since then, the brunette had learned to hover within a millimeter or less of the ground and move just like everyone else. Only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up and touch the floor did Noble allow herself the briefest moment of excruciating pain to retrieve what was lost.
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    wasn't there just something about having to touch the floor to retrieve fallen objects?

    "Don't worry, sweetheart. Allow me." Even as Noble spoke, the five small ramekins floated from the low counter through the air and made their way next to each bowl.
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    this cliffhanger is badly placed. you gave us too much information and very little uncertainty.

    AN: I'm genuinely not sure about how I handled this interaction. I know it's not over, but there was a lot more that I wanted to put here. I know that Dumbledore's behaviour is a bit out of character, but there is a reason for it that you'll see in the next chapter. On the bright side, I'm really looking forward to writing the fight scene. As always, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.
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    And here we have the ignoramus. Karen doesn't have a kekkei genkai huh? What the hell is that super special Chakra that heals people when they chew on her then? Oh, I guess you think Super Special abilities don't qualify as kekkei genkai? Abilities like dojutsus, and Chakra absorbers? Tell me, what is her super special healing Chakra that was the whole reason her mother died and she was fated to die playing doctor/ human sacrifice if not a kekkei genkai? Oh, and do me a favor while you're at it, tell me, since turn around is fair play and all, how did me belittling you make you feel? Good? good.

    Seeing the change, he was shocked, as he knew this was an ability that even very few pureblooded Uzumaki could have.
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