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What is Naruto: The new journey

Lee la novela Naruto: The new journey escrita por el autor pratiksymbol publicada en WebNovel. A boy abandoned and hated, hunted by the very people who swore to protect him, two beings watching him from the distant stars above and a new destiny awaiting.Watch as how the boy named Naruto changes...

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A boy abandoned and hated, hunted by the very people who swore to protect him, two beings watching him from the distant stars above and a new destiny awaiting. Watch as how the boy named Naruto changes his destiny as he breaks free from the shackle that bound him ********************************************** DISCLAIMER:- I do not own naruto or any other characters from naruto. Only the story and my characters are solely mine.

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THE LOST PERCEPTION

One Kobby Wayne was 14 years of age who was having challenges about age and life , he was disrespectful to old men especially men above thirty years of age and has nothing to offer in life because he sees such men as lazy ,At the age of eighteen Kobby completed the senior high level of education and very unfortunate he lost both parents in an accident, since then the poor boy couldn’t further his education but to be on the street as a hustler, At the age of twenty eight Kobby has nothing to offer in life like the same way he was judging other men out there, one day Kobby confessed that in life never look down on anyone if he or she is not perfect on this journey of life . We believe life is full of surprises and age does not matter in this life , Life is you and no one will be at your help if you don’t help yourself, to me age is just numbers because when we concentrate how fast we grow and the achievements we need to have which we haven’t had even half of it , it sometimes put many into miserable activities, my grandma once says : in life we move slowly like tortoise because creating our own short path sometimes end us to a place we wish not be , money is good but why do the rich man dies upon all his or her money and the poor also dies , hmmm so it means money can’t specifically save us from dying but wait, what kills the poor faster can’t kill the rich as fast like that so that should tell you that is good to work hard and get money , money !money !money ! I love you money and pray you be in path all the time .

Kobby_Wayne · Real
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Magical World: Takdir Cinta Abadi

Kisah petualangan cinta yang mendebarkan hingga terdampar ke dunia lain seperti Bumi. Siapa yang tak mengenal Bumi? Tempat modern seperti sekarang, tentunya beda dengan dunia mereka yang tampak lebih megah nan klasik. Lantas curi dengar perjodohan orang tuanya, muncullah ide konyol di benak tokoh utama wanita. Dan memilih kabur ke Hutan Terlarang Agung di bagian Tengah Magic World. Apalagi mereka belum kenal sama sekali anehnya lagi mereka masih anak-anak. 1 bulan hidup bersama di hutan tersebut dan mereka saling jatuh cinta layaknya kisah cinta remaja dalam novel fiksi yang penuh intrik dan canda. Wah! Mereka masih kecil dan selisih 2 tahun, tapi sudah mengenal cinta. Sayang sekali! Takdir seakan mempermainkan mereka. Hingga suatu saat mereka berpisah. Haah, apa sih yang kurang dari cinta mereka?! Tak ada yang tau. Saling percaya? Kerjasama? Menghargai? Mencintai? Dan bersama-sama sehidup semati? Iya mereka bisa. Perasaan tak pernah berkurang dan rasa sayang tak pernah hilang? Iya mereka bisa. Mereka bisa semua? Takdir seolah mempermainkan mereka. Saling berkorban? Mungkin bisa. Cinta abadi atau cinta sejati? Mereka mau keduanya dibungkus jadi satu! _ _ _ _ _ "Berjanjilah kepadaku di bawah cahaya bulan ini bahwa kau tak akan melupakannku," seru gadis kecil yang sedang berbaring di pangkuannya. "Aku janji!" ucap lembut anak kecil laki-laki itu sambil tersenyum cerah dan mengaitkan jarinya dengan jari kelingking gadis kecil itu. _ _ _ _ _ "Aku menyesal telah membuatmu dalam masalah dan bahaya, maafkan kesalahanku," tutur Putri Aresya dengan sedih. "Aku mencintaimu Putri Aresya," sorak Pangeran Alemo tiba-tiba. "Hah...? Putri Aresya pun tercengang mendengar kalimat tiba-tiba itu dan tersipu malu. Ia pun segera melanjutkan perkataannya. "Aku berharap kita bisa bertemu lagi di masa depan. Ingatlah ini, jiwa dan hatiku akan selalu ada di hati dan di sisimu. Aku juga mencintaimu Pangeran Alemo," ucap Putri Aresya sambil tersenyum manis. "Carilah tiket kencan kita nanti, aku mau menjelajah keliling dunia bersamamu kelak," imbuhnya bersemangat. Angin pun mulai berhembus kencang beberapa detik, tampak sekilas cahaya putih mulai redup dan suasana terasa gelap, penuh sesak dan mencengkam. _ _ _ _ _ 14 tahun kemudian Bandara, Negara Z. "Sudah sekian lama kita tak bertemu dan aku merindukanmu, di mana kah keberadaanmu sekarang," gumam pemuda tampan yang sedang berdiri di tengah keramaian dengan memakai kacamata hitamnya. Terdengar riuhnya banyak orang karena sedang asyik berbincang-bincang sambil menunggu penerbangan mereka. Tap tap tap... Bruuk "Oh ya ampun maafkan saya Tuan saya tak sengaja, saya sungguh minta maaf. Maaf saya harus cepat-cepat pergi sebelum ketinggalan penerbangan," ucap seorang gadis cantik nan manis yang tak sengaja menabrak pemuda tampan tadi karena sedang terburu-buru. Dia pun segera membantu pemuda tampan tadi mengemas barang-barangnya. Mata mereka sempat terkunci. Gadis itu pun segera mengalihkan pandangan dan pergi meninggalkan pemuda yang tengah menenangkan jantungnya yang berdegup cukup kencang. Ia pun heran dan membatin "Apa ini? Mengapa jantungku berdegup kencang sekali? Tak biasanya seperti ini? Aneh sekali." _ _ _ _ _ Semoga suka baca novel ini. Jangan lupa tambahkan ke koleksi ya:) So, happy reading. _ _ _ _ _

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XumitLv13Xumit

The beginning was somewhat enjoyable, but soon it turned into a disaster. I thought this would turn out to be a good read, but that wasn't the case. I thought Naruto (The MC of the story) would be the only special one with otherwordly parents that saved him from his life full of misery in Konoha. But, Nah, the author had to introduce another random overpowered woman to adopt Sasuke so that he can be a good rival for the MC. That was a terrible move taking the uniqueness away from the MC. Nobody wants to read a not-so-special MC. In the original story, Naruto was special because of Kyuubi inside him, and you made it worthless by removing it in this story. I didn't mind it that but giving the same privilege to Sasuke is just not to my liking. And the thing with Hinata was just too much for me. Do you expect me to believe that Hiashi would abandon her daughter just because she cared about Naruto? FFS, he's a dead guy in Hiashi's views. I don't like forced plot, and that's what you did. As a result, you completely ruined the story for me and many others. You can write whatever you want, but don't expect everyone to share the same opinions as yours. That's precisely what happened in this story.

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

I thought naruto is going to be special, but no author decided to make Sasuke special too. I don't care if you're going to change Sasuke personality, we naruto to be special becomes he has strong parents but you did the same to Sasuke, **** Sasuke.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

I hope Konan, join the harem. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

I don't like it, it is NOT NARUTO!. It is wayyyyy to AU! Too many silly things! For example, aliens kidnapped Naruto from their spaceship (lol)using naruto's DNA to create a 'sister' for him the only purpose of it is probably for the author to have incest. Also, Chakra is now apparently part of even higher energy called (origin energy) WTF?!! The author could have made everything more believable, even incest if he so wishes and cut down all that other nonsense. I mean aliens kidnapped him really? Wait? Maybe this is a parody. The author should have let us know in the synopsis.

AnimeWrite
AnimeWriteLv1AnimeWrite

The MC is not unique at all!!! And boring use of tragedy card on Hinata just so she can be with Naruto. Bah, and worse of all he's a modafuckin incest loving bastard. What more can you say... I quit...

Arc_Leoscorpio
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George_WEB
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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

author, waiting for the background of the story that happened to Hinata, and you can also give her Orochimaru Sarutobi, barter xD, hopefully you can also make both "Uzumakis" enter into a relationship, they are not true brothers. ------------------------ It would be interesting to have Nanako and Hinata and maybe Konan, after they finish everything that this world has to offer, you will go to another dimension or anime world: - "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -·Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou ka· = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc

Akshay007
Akshay007Lv12Akshay007

This is good story.... If you want something more than those repeating fanfic... Here is the thing that you are looking for .... . . . . I hope that story will become interesting as the story continued....

Sean_Herbig
Sean_HerbigLv14Sean_Herbig

I really liked this story so different and satisfying seeing naruto not being "naruto" and the plot so different then the usual its been 1 year since an update on ur naruto story please please continue and finish writing. thank you

Eternal_Hellhound
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hope you are still continue this fanfic one of the good naruto fanfics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

asaade9999
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wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey

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Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Great fanfic you have here!!!! Definitely vote for a lot of chaos andvdarkvside been bring out to the light... Please expose all the ugliness of the village and let them all on the plain view to sow chaos... After that, just watch them blaming each others, killing each others, destroying the village balance and everyone will have it pick side and kill each others...

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Mxpert_0
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Its a good story although it just started it has a lot of potential as long as the author keep the updates stable and the writing quality is very good saw some errors but only like 5 in twelve chapters that very good in my book I think you should try it out

pratiksymbol
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Hey author here shamelessly giving myself five stars. I hope that you all like this story and please support me so that I can keep updating this.

Dark_Magma
Dark_MagmaLv4Dark_Magma

alright then story is good with good development, even if i didnt like that sasuke got power up at the beginning i still read it and enjoyed it. Everything is good if not for the fact that there aint any updates anymore which is why this story wont get a more than 4.2. also i originally wanted to give this story a 4 stare review without choosing updating stability at all but i misclicked and im lazy to rewrite all this right now and change it. so that one star stays and could be justified by author maybe having troubles as i also read his atg novel which has the super system and its quite good and was updated months ago at the latest i think. also i didnt know the atg with super system was his story. I just found this book(naruto one) on the internet and thought 'well, its interesting so why not read it on webnovel instead.' Whatever happened to author i hope he can come back cuz his stories are good and also atg stories arent that much so yeah. keep it up.

Jotaro_Sniperkun
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I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review webnovel is my body exp is my blood i have created over a thousand useless reviews yet these hands will never hold anything so as i pray unlimited exp works.

Suppa_Readah
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