My Angel system
In old times a boy named Luis had lost his parents at a very tender age, he never even got to know who his parents were. With his parents gone he had to be taken care of by his wicked aunt who hardly fed him once a day, in effort to get food Luis was adviced to steal by a strange book without minding the punishment of burning given to thieves. When Luis was caught he ran into the forest and the villagers including his aunt chased him down with torches. "I think it's best I surrender now" Luis stopped running and was panting now. "I think I can see him!" he heard the village blacksmith shout. He took a little step backwards and down a hole he went. "Noooooo!!!" Luis screamed as he went down the hole, the last thing he saw was a red glowing light and then it was lights out for him. "What happened?" Luis groaned. "Where am I? And why is my body so cold" he said touching his arm" A screen appeard in front of him. [ System revived ] "What?" That was where the true journey began. Now the fate of mankind lies in his hands as he keeps completing tasks and quests to get stronger. Luis keeps getting stronger but the question is: Will he be able to stop Lucifer? Join my discord channel for more info about the novel. https://discord.gg/7DvJCBfvSy Also if you have time, you can check out The Angel System by ECM Manga.
Dramatic Excuse
"You mean like this?" Ace said as spun his leg and kicked it like he was kicking a soccer ball.
His motion had made nothing close to a tornado and had only created a little slash that had disappeared as soon as it was produced.
"No, like this," Luis said as he stretched his right leg in front of him, spun it, and stumped it on the ground to release the tornado.
Ace kept looking at the tornado in amazement until it had a long-distance before vanishing.
"Try it now," Luis said.
"Ok," Ace said as he tried to replicate Luis' exact moves.
He stretched his leg in front of him and turned to Luis who gave him a thumbs up to tell him that he was getting it.
After getting the confirmation that he was getting it, he slowly raised his leg and began to spin it, gathering all the wind needed to create the tornado.
Once he was sure he had gathered enough wind, he stumped his foot on the ground releasing the tornado.
"I did it." Ace said with a cheerful voice.