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Marsy: Miracles on Mysterious Mars

Year 2080, humanity started colonizing Mars. It's a huge craze to go there, endless possibilities are waiting. Mostly youngsters are mad to go there. Everything seems to go well there. But smell of secrecy could be felt as one approaches Earth's so called twin planet. Deep down, something is wrong. Something unusual is happening on the big planet. Leaders are suspiciously good to each other there, a little too good. As our heroes dig further into Mars, it turns out Mars is not really what they thought it would be, it's more. What shocking secrets awaits our heroes? Why is a mysterious man finding some specific newcomers so desperately? Answer lies...

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Revision 1

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Hi, I don't expect that you kind reader even remember the novel, nor me. Since I am continuing this after so long. I have thought about continuing but so many issues were present related to study. Now that I have completed my Bachelor's, I'm continuing it again, and hopefully I'll finish the novel before taking this long break. And meanwhile I have made other novel ideas for the future too. Well I won't start then untill I finish this one.

It is pretty irrational to think you'd remember what happened in the story so far, so I have made this revision chapter, Summarising everything that happened so far. It's divided chapter(s) wise so if you have any doubts, you can go straight to the chapter to re read. It was a different experience writing this revision chapter, because even I forgot so many things happened in the novel.

So enjoy this, and I'll start uploading from tomorrow.

This is what happened until now, chapter 18 of volume 2. Normally revision chapter goes at the end of a volume and start of a new one, and I'll try to do exactly that in future. But as I'm continuing this after a long time, the position is odd.

Volume - 1

Chapter 1: Two unknown beings talks about some plans. They don't seem friends but co workers. They activate something on Mars. This causes a shockwave. On Earth two boys in Darjeeling were chilling on the roof. When the shockwave reached them, they saw a yellow light in each other's forehead for a small time. They suddenly heard an echo of an old man saying something is wrong in Mars. They got down and slept in fear.

Chapter 2 and 3: A rocket launching facility is introduced. Alex, Emma, Shaun, Rick, Ravi and Lucy meet in a rocket going to Mars. They became more or less friends. The bond strengthed (I guess?)after the mock fights. Unfortunately what started as fun, became a little serious. Rick and Shaun faced off in a mock fight. Both got injured.

Chapter 4: They carry the injured to the infirmary. They meet the captain.

Chapter 5 and 6: The kids talk with each other. Scene shifts to Mars. A quarrel was seen in the Gizmo district headquarters. They talk about some incoming crisis. After the argument, the man named Sat left with woman named Cecile. Back to the rocket, some irregularities were present. But it seemed like wasn't much. Ravi and Alex exchanged a cautious conversation with no apparent cause.

Chapter 7: Everyone is put to sleep. Nothing goes wrong at first, in week 3 connecting to earth was not possible. Earth was confused too. Mars assured the rocket that it was communication issue which will be corrected shortly. Scene changes to Mars. The council is shown for the first time. Out of 10 members, one named 010 rejoined the team. They had a plan to sabotage the rocket, but 010 opposed and proposed to take them to their side. The cause was out of 100 candidates, 20 were on the rocket. (The numbering was a little different. I changed it a bit.

Chapter 8 and 9: Emergency situation is explained to the kids. They take precautions. In Mars, Sat, Cecile and someone named Sayak and something.

Chapter 10: Sayak reaches rocket and explains the emergency situation, it was a terrorist attack. They land safely. But stays inside because of terrorist attack.

Chapter 11-13: Captain James Yamato pulls a cunning move and sacrifices himself in a cool way, I'm not explaining it again.

Chapter 14: Nothing big happens. Sayak gives the kid a message. They'll go to an educational institution instead of the companies.

Chapter 15-18: The kids are staying at Arena Hotel. Bunch of conversation happens. Ravi left after a small confrontation, and doesn't return to them. They goes and sees the Arena which is a big stadium.They saw some fights and decide to enter in the tournament and starts winning.

Chapter 19: Sat and Cecile reaches arena in disguise. They suddenly discovers the kids are playing in the tournament with the name GAIA.

Chapter 20: Alex picks up some random conversations. Looked like something shady was going on behind the scenes.

Chapter 21: Alex meets Sat for a brief time. Later a news came with surprise. Next opponent team of GAIA had a weird name with member named Ravi. Shaun goes to fight and encounters a peculiar opponent. It was weirdly powerful with super speed.

Chapter 22: While fighting for life, Shaun suddenly heard Ravi. He somehow wins the match but gets injured in the process.

Chapter 23: They want to forfeit next matches but Terms and Conditions don't allow it. Mysteriously Rick lost before even properly starting the fight. He gets admitted to hospital along with Shaun.

Chapter 24- 27: Some mysterious guys visit team GAIA to check their injury. Sat gives Cecile a mysterious envelope containing a plan. After execution of a dramatic plan and show, Cecile wins the match. Then team GAIA meets with Cecile and Sat. Meanwhile a sudden massacre happens at an IT company where some of the new people from Earth was present.

Chapter 28: Sat showed them a ball which caused yellow dots to appear on everyone's forehead of team GAIA. Everyone except for Shaun decided to join Sat's institute, Shaun was taken under Major Sayak's Zapta School of Optics.

Chapter 29-31: A doubt clearing session was done, it was revealed that Mars has been disconnected from Earth for some reasons. It will take 24 hours to reconnect. Sarthak was introduced. He only talked in a robotic voice. He seemed like he only existed virtually. Everyone gets in the vehicle l, Sat and Cecile starts a side quest of a parcel delivery. Meanwhile team GAIA fiddles around in the vehicle and damages the magical ball that showed yellow spots. As a payment of delivery, they bring Ravi. Sat leaves in a bike and everyone else continues journey.

Chapter 32-33: Sarthak notifies them of danger. A similar vehicle appears in front of them.They capture two killer boxes and Sat defeats another one. In the process of course he injures himself...again.

Chapter 34-36: Team GAIA is introduced to their rooms in the institution. Everyone gathers at a dinner table to talk. Ravi tries to run away but Sat pours water on the plan. Sat gives small pieces of advices to everyone of team GAIA.

[END OF VOLUME 1]

Chapter 37: Dinner ends and everyone goes to their room. Everyone sleeps, in the middle of the night, Sat wakes up to two silhouettes, one blue and one red. Meanwhile after a few hours, the council holds a meeting. They decide to push a button that activates some special bombs. It was also revealed that as 004 and 010 returned after a gap, the information of that time range won't be available to them.

Chapter 38-41: News of various explosions was heard, the places included the place where Sat and Cecile went for delivery. Meanwhile Rick and Lucy discovers the ball breaking caused their hand to turn black. They were taken to a temple along with everyone.They meet Twinny, a one eyed, two tailed purple colored cat (-ish creature). With its help, the two were healed for time being. Sat explains some of the things that are happening in Mars which sounded like pure science fiction. Razom case of Rayza was mentioned.

Chapter 42-43: Eye opening ceremony is explained. The cure to their problem is using the cause as power. That increases risk of assassination by mysterious killers. Cecile accidentally discovers something related to Sarthak. Sat with the help of Twinny goes through the process of Eye Opening.

Chapter 44: Rick and Lucy faints and goes in a dream like state. They see themselves in the state and they discuss various things. Meanwhile Sat loses consciousness too.

Chapter 45-47: Everyone was taken to hospital for first aid. The kids meet their seniors Connor and Archie. Apparently Sat didn't know they were in hospital with that much injury. A flashback begins and it's revealed that they both fought Cecile and they accidentally started something unusual, something related to their power. This resulted in bad injuries caused by Cecile. Sarthak informs the coming news of Mars Police Department team.

Chapter 48: Inspector Richard comes with various allegations against Sat. He threatens him back with his family. They talk it out with a pact. It's revealed that Major Sayak also came with Inspector. He came for Sam. He is the one who argued with Sat where we first met Sat. He messed up an assassination. He arrests Sam.

Chapter 49-50: Connor and Archie talks about their fight with Cecile when Cecile visited them with some snacks. On the other hand Sat was entering the temple in disguise. He was doing something in a secret lab whole talking with Sarthak. Meanwhile Shaun was getting into his new room after introduction with Commander. He had eye opening too. His inner voice started talking with him. Means billions of lightyear away, some creatures discuss something about past. Something related to possible war situation.

Chapter 51: The next day was their first day of studying. The class system was explained. It is a two year course, classes were divided into years naturally and there is two sections, Alpha and A. Alpha class is very secret and special and protected.

Chapter 52-53: A drone attack occurs just after class Alpha enters the building. Security easily neutralizes them. A bird gets injured in the process which explodes knocking Emma out. In counterattack, second year class A breaks commander 005's entire system down. Meanwhile Emma is sent to doctor for resting.

Chapter 54: Another council meeting is shown. The president of Mars was there. Apparently Galactic Earth Association is not happy with the recent communication glitch with Earth. Soon officers from GEA will come to Mars for audit.

Chapter 55: Sat is suddenly reminded of the co km inf funeral of Captain James. He informs other that there will be a council meeting too. And they'll be questioned there. Meanwhile Major Sayak also informs Shaun about this meeting. Sat makes preparation for leaving, setting lookouts.

New chapter from tomorrow! I hope you enjoy, as always thanks for being here.

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