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Legend of Bumi

Autor: Yohanlie
Fantasy
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What is Legend of Bumi

Lee la novela Legend of Bumi escrita por el autor Yohanlie publicada en WebNovel. In this world. Sword and magic is an common skill to survive.Our protagonist coming from Earth, and he was the only one who understand about cultivation technique.Ardyan Lie woke up in another world. ...

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In this world. Sword and magic is an common skill to survive. Our protagonist coming from Earth, and he was the only one who understand about cultivation technique. Ardyan Lie woke up in another world. Half of his memories was lost, only a part of his knowledge still remains. This was not the same earth that he once knew. Then he met with Nero who worked for the Cross Guard, an organization that delivered goods and valuables. To join the Cross Guard, Lie had to go through a series of test, with the first among them being a battle test with weapons. He realized that this new world was cruel. Kill or be killed is normal in here. However, Lie didn't have any other choice. To keep himself survived, he must using his Martial Arts technique at the fullest combined with Mana--magic concept on this world. This story will lead you to the big conflict on Terra. The battle of Star Bringer that will decide the fate of humankind.

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Yohanlie
YohanlieAutorYohanlie

This is an author. Please give me review to improving this novel. Thank you. English is not my 1st language. But, i will keep it up. Thank you for everyone who give me powerstone, review, and encourage me.

6yr

TheLastSupper
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I've read the outline (draft) of this story in the author original language (from his facebook). I never think that English language is the biggest obstacle for him. To be honest, the novel itself has a complex plot, twist, drama, etc. I appreciate author resolution to keep learning English. As a support, I will give you a good rate.

6yr
Dr_Zombie
Dr_ZombieLv13Dr_Zombie

Hmm, this novel is very hard to read and needs an editor or a proofreader of some kind to go over it. I can understand that English may not be the author's first language, but it still needs some more work. I give you props for actually writing a story though, so just keep at it and you will surely improve. I can't really comment on the story progression so far, as it is only the beginning. However, I shall keep an eye on this novel and see what the future brings.

6yr
HotaruKeikokku
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I adding the rate and powerstone. Because it's looks like you keep revise and improving your english. The story is good but can't review much because it's only 3 chapters for now.

6yr
ElaryWakefield
ElaryWakefieldLv11ElaryWakefield

I am loving this world. I want my sky to be purple filled with stars! Either way, I feel like writing is very smooth and everything is easy to visualize and follow. I have only read the first chapter but I'm already hooked. I can't wait to read more!

4yr
Dupi
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I must say I'm interested in this. Though in my opinion, took me until chapter 4 when it's starting to get interesting. The first 3 chapters are fine, but I feel like they don't click for me to understand what happens. Still, I hope you can continue this until the end since I know you really want to finish this. Keep up the good work!

5yr
ViYue
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Minus : grammar. Anything except that is nice. I love where the story is going. Ganbatte! :D keep the goodwork. Please keep writing until the story finish. <3

6yr
Nearata
NearataLv5Nearata

First, thanks for ur hardwork! I can't give much review ... But i like how the story was flow. Actually, my grammar is rather poor too, as English is not my native language. So, i can't help u improve ur grammar skill or i can do much review for this story, haha. Anyways, keep it up!

6yr
Yuigahama
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Revela spoiler

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niddaii2
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Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!

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MasKara
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I like the mc character design, he somehow looks idiot but know what he's doing, with his new best friend, they just look like naruto and sasuke Older reviewer said the grammar doesnt good, but I see the grammar quite well that makes me think you must had revise it and thats good, keep it up

4yr
Cel_T
Cel_TLv5Cel_T

This story feels lighthearted and has funny moments. The world seems vast and has much to be explored. The only minus is the language but it's normal on WN. Among the problems are tense shifting (present and past). Perhaps getting better editors would help. Keep writing and read more formally published English books. This could help improve your writing. Keep it up!

4yr
Ganzoku
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The story getting interesting. I give you almost perfect score to boost your update. Don't ever drop this story again because i really following this.

5yr
DeJeL
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Constructive Criticism: One month is a long time to wait for a single chapter, I hope you did not drop. Also, I hope you do more with the light star and dark star stuff soon.;,;. Positive Feedback: Good character build thus far and nice story idea.;,;. Keep up the good work. Personal Feedback: I enjoyed this thus far thus I will continue until you lose my interest, have gone 6 months without any sort of update, or are finished with this book, hope you did not drop this and do not in the future.;,;.

5yr
gensouEmpire
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Revela spoiler

6yr
Soren_Lev
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I might share my bits of personal sentiment here, but I found this story lacking in so many aspect. I will tolerate the grammar and everything, because I know how sucks it is having a barrier language. What I am trying to share is the fact that the development of this story wasn't really that good, at least yet. I couldn't see it other than your typical using "Another World" troupe as per se. The humor itself I found it to be quite dry, it's trying to be funny but in practice, not so much. It's need to be more improved a lot to get to the point where the humor could I considered acceptable. I suggest for you to read some story that has the subtle yet revealing humor like Experimental Log of the Crazy Lich as it was one of the best out there. The fighting scene which trying to be cool but nope, it wasn't. It just need to be polished and having the detail geared up though, and everything will be set to go. I might say that following your own pace is important, so just keep it up.

6yr
Newlife256
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Since its only have 4 chapter rightnow i cant really tell about the story it self. but from many other novel that i have read this novel have quite good start, buts its lack a ******* thats make you really want to stay updated with the story. but since we are from same group and country i will try to help you with a power stone daily.. hope your story will become much more interesting in the future..

6yr

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