Review Detail of Dr_Zombie in Legend of Bumi

Hmm, this novel is very hard to read and needs an editor or a proofreader of some kind to go over it. I can understand that English may not be the author's first language, but it still needs some more work. I give you props for actually writing a story though, so just keep at it and you will surely improve. I can't really comment on the story progression so far, as it is only the beginning. However, I shall keep an eye on this novel and see what the future brings.