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In Avatar World With Naruto System

Autor: Dr_Chad
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Ling Tian died and was reincarnated in the world of his dreams and with a cheat he always wanted.

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A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews complaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

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KratosFarlier
KratosFarlierLv4KratosFarlier

A top knotch novel which has only a single problem....too few chapters. The character is cool and not a beta male,there is less action but it is managable with the story. Good luck and dont drop!!

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

Actually interesting, seeing as how u've upgraded the avatar world to match naruto skill-sets...still, the sharigan, sage mode, lightening body, six gate, and the rest of the hax **** in naruto shouldnt be added, that was stupid...but GL, u will need it cause they hax ****. interested to see how u'll over come this and what you will do. As for story, its interesting, but too soon I guess, hopefully u wont make MC a retard, follow cannon cast or be some heroic *****...suggestions: add ur own ****, make the world larger, the spirit world could be some **** like las noches?. Add alchemly from F.M.A...it could be like a unique **** that non benders with high chi can do?, IDK, bending elements is weak against naruto ****, so maybe give some other **** to the avatar people. Any relationship build it. I still think its stupid considering how vastly different the worlds are in power [despite u equalizing it cause naruto has hax ****], but it is interesting..so GL I guess. interested to see what u do **: the first review shall remain as a fk u

InfiniteVoid
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Revela spoiler

Helli_Ernesto_San
Helli_Ernesto_SanLv4Helli_Ernesto_San

Está bastante buena la verdad, más de lo que esperaba, a puesto bien las cosas de Naruto en el avatar world (Al menos hasta el 15, los capítulo que hay de está reseña) pero quizás lo estás chetando un poquito demasiado rápido es decir tiene 11, y ni siquiera ha salido de la nación fuego, si sigue a ese ritmo la trama de avatar no le va poder seguir el ritmo, aquí se puede hacer, inventarte weas propias, el mundo se los espíritus, o cosas de otros mundos y system o directamente un poco de todo, y si tuviera que quejarme de algo simplemente solo 15 caps pero eso con el tiempo. A mantenido bastante bien la esencia de los de avatar y a hecho cambios acordé y adecuados en ellos y eso es todo.

K4sumig4ok4Utaha
K4sumig4ok4UtahaLv10K4sumig4ok4Utaha

So far it has not been disappointing, i really hope more in this novel. But one thing i really pay attention to, most novels of this type will be very easy to drop, i really hope that the author will stick to his stance. If it is going to be dropped, it's better to stop throwing away the time readers are hoping for in this novel. Whatever it is will always support you, and also i suggest opening your patreon website. Keep up the passion for writer-san.

ferferfer2
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Have not read it yet, but just the title made it an instant add in my library. Someone with naruto powers in the world of avatar, the idea alone makes me drool!🤤

bilu619
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First of all i love your work absalutly no hate here But You know i do not want to be that guy but i have to be By giving him all that your just writings your self into a whole which you cant claw your way out of U could have made do with tayjutsu nad biyakugan and he stil would be as op you as want and not break the world Shrigan is a hax, six path is a hax,

Frona_Gorgophone
Frona_GorgophoneLv10Frona_Gorgophone

I am the soul of my account Exp is my body and coin is my blood I have created countless reviews Unaware of the congruity Nor aware of the quality Withstood critics to create reviews, waiting for one's acceptance I have no shame. This is the easiest way My whole life was Unlimited Useless Reviews

UchihaFanatic
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Revela spoiler

ImBluey
ImBlueyLv14ImBluey

To the Author, this is your novel, you're creating a vision of a world to your own bidding, this is your art, don't mind the haters, you're doing great just by making this and making people happy, although not everyone, nevertheless a virtuous act. Keep it up, you have supporters like me behind you, I look forward to more of this work of yours. P. S. This is but a mere wish of mine... I WANT MOAR CHAPSSSSS

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mizaome
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Good the story is very good. Best ff for Avatar I read. Naruto with Avatar world. That's a new idea. **. Just ignore those people who give 1 star out of spite. There nothing wrong with your novel, they we're just stupid and jealous. Give us more updates.

Madara1137
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Good hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....................................................

AAM0825
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DemonGodHiatus
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I like this fanfic.

Lucifers_Vendeta
Lucifers_VendetaLv4Lucifers_Vendeta

I really enjoy this story!! I flipped my lid when I read the icha icha book series omg 😂 he’s gunna be so rich wel more rich!!!! Poor toad sage😂

DaoistUltraGamer
DaoistUltraGamerLv3DaoistUltraGamer

Okay, first of all let's talk about writing quality, grammar, structure and things like that are pretty good overall, I believe that anyone in the seventh or eighth grade can read this, although there is room for improvement. The story is developing in a pretty weird slow manner, some chapters doesn't even seen to make the story progress to tell the truth, this needs to change or improve since there is too many irrelevant information being written. As for character design it's ok I guess, he is like me, you or any other common boy you could think of, however It looks like his time inside the world didn't changed his character at all, which doesn't makes too much sense for me, considering his new background he should have at least gotten a little bit more serious I believe. Update stability, all I can say is that if the author didn't write so many irrelevant information in some chapters it would be a 5 stars for it instead of a 4, the way things are currently it would be better if he could publish one more chapter per day. As for the world, I think its being well developed for now, but its too early to say anything, let's see if the author will continue to explain aspects of the world and show them happening instead of simply telling us readers about it. Conclusion: 4/5 this is an above average fanfic, the main character is interesting, his powers are developing well and he doesn't feels like a broken character (YET), his relationship with the other characters need a little bit more of development since in 15 chapters it looked like he forgot his childhood friend which is weird for me, and there's even the fact that his parents aren't that present in the story. The canon characters seems to be well represented and they are what you would expect, which is good, since the author didn't changed their identity for a stupid reason like some fics do such as the Harry Potter ones that makes Dumbledore the villain, I'm completely hook by the possiblities of this story and I hope the author won't do a Harem, but in case its inevitable, please author remember to limit it to 2/3 girls, or boys, idk, your story, aheeem..., too many girls ruins the story and please make the way their relationship develops be something credible, love is something that takes time to form and it can't be rushed. Also don't limit the main character, with his powers and abilities he could be anything, even the conqueror of the world, just do remember to make sure that his actions are in accordance to his dreams/objectives/motivations. Good luck author, I don't know if you have, but if you don't, you should create a patron, your fic has the required potential.

Yarrayy
YarrayyLv4Yarrayy

This is good, although there are some annoying and insignificant parts, but still a lot of good quality of writing=4 renewal stability=4 story development=3 character design=4 world background=4

_Cooldude_
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Best avatar fanfic i have read so far.💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

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