A top knotch novel which has only a single problem....too few chapters. The character is cool and not a beta male,there is less action but it is managable with the story. Good luck and dont drop!!

Actually interesting, seeing as how u've upgraded the avatar world to match naruto skill-sets...still, the sharigan, sage mode, lightening body, six gate, and the rest of the hax **** in naruto shouldnt be added, that was stupid...but GL, u will need it cause they hax ****. interested to see how u'll over come this and what you will do. As for story, its interesting, but too soon I guess, hopefully u wont make MC a retard, follow cannon cast or be some heroic *****...suggestions: add ur own ****, make the world larger, the spirit world could be some **** like las noches?. Add alchemly from F.M.A...it could be like a unique **** that non benders with high chi can do?, IDK, bending elements is weak against naruto ****, so maybe give some other **** to the avatar people. Any relationship build it. I still think its stupid considering how vastly different the worlds are in power [despite u equalizing it cause naruto has hax ****], but it is interesting..so GL I guess. interested to see what u do **: the first review shall remain as a fk u

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Está bastante buena la verdad, más de lo que esperaba, a puesto bien las cosas de Naruto en el avatar world (Al menos hasta el 15, los capítulo que hay de está reseña) pero quizás lo estás chetando un poquito demasiado rápido es decir tiene 11, y ni siquiera ha salido de la nación fuego, si sigue a ese ritmo la trama de avatar no le va poder seguir el ritmo, aquí se puede hacer, inventarte weas propias, el mundo se los espíritus, o cosas de otros mundos y system o directamente un poco de todo, y si tuviera que quejarme de algo simplemente solo 15 caps pero eso con el tiempo. A mantenido bastante bien la esencia de los de avatar y a hecho cambios acordé y adecuados en ellos y eso es todo.

So far it has not been disappointing, i really hope more in this novel. But one thing i really pay attention to, most novels of this type will be very easy to drop, i really hope that the author will stick to his stance. If it is going to be dropped, it's better to stop throwing away the time readers are hoping for in this novel. Whatever it is will always support you, and also i suggest opening your patreon website. Keep up the passion for writer-san.

Have not read it yet, but just the title made it an instant add in my library. Someone with naruto powers in the world of avatar, the idea alone makes me drool!🤤

First of all i love your work absalutly no hate here But You know i do not want to be that guy but i have to be By giving him all that your just writings your self into a whole which you cant claw your way out of U could have made do with tayjutsu nad biyakugan and he stil would be as op you as want and not break the world Shrigan is a hax, six path is a hax,

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To the Author, this is your novel, you're creating a vision of a world to your own bidding, this is your art, don't mind the haters, you're doing great just by making this and making people happy, although not everyone, nevertheless a virtuous act. Keep it up, you have supporters like me behind you, I look forward to more of this work of yours. P. S. This is but a mere wish of mine... I WANT MOAR CHAPSSSSS