First of all i love your work absalutly no hate here But You know i do not want to be that guy but i have to be By giving him all that your just writings your self into a whole which you cant claw your way out of U could have made do with tayjutsu nad biyakugan and he stil would be as op you as want and not break the world Shrigan is a hax, six path is a hax,
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LIKEYah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
ur eng in ur bk is fine...just use grammarly but over there its readable...as for the story, it was interesting but not much content, only thing I can say is to not look at the world like an anime, but rather for what it is, a fked up place,,,and hopefully MC isnt a friendly dude, or will follow cannon cast...make it before..more interesting