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Heavenly Feeling

Asura, a genius kid with a talent in anything he’d try, is filled with the endless boredom of his “reality”. The gods and powerful beings in his universe have chosen to spice things up, rather then existing in their life of solitude and boredom. Throughout the cosmos, beings of all kind are granted true blessings and some even chosen as champions. Asuras life of boredom was now changed. As he’s blessed with many chances and opportunities to have the thrill he’d searched for. I’m new to this whole writing scene, so I’m just writing what I feel like. I’d love to be better, if there’s anyone out there with some good criticism, please give it.

Aizo_sen · Cómic
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5 Chs

Starfall

The stars in the sky shine bright with many different colors. Streams of light seem to slowly fall all around the world as the stars get ever brighter.

Asura opens his eyes to find himself naked, floating in an empty void, with nothing more then a twinkling blue light that could either be extremely far or very small.

"What exactly is going on? Am I dreaming? This feels weird... different." As he looks at his hands curiously.

"It's begun" a light beautiful voice rung across the empty cosmos, or at least, that's how it felt for Asura. The angelic voice continued, "The collective boredom of the beings all across space and time caused the start of something quite frightening, and yet, I can't help but get excited for what's to come." As the light began to shiver or vibrate.

Asuras felt like something fun was gonna happen and couldn't help but grin. 'This is crazy, this has gotta be happening, it has to be real. Please tell me that those higher beings are actually real and their finally tired of sitting back!' "Please" Asura whispered to himself.

"I am Evelyn but you may call me Eve." the angelic voice spoke, as the light grew and took the form of a beautiful woman. She had bright pink eyes, long light silver hair, soft facial features, and a perfect body that neither to thicc or thin, but is nice, perky and plump. She to was naked in the empty, void and was stood across Asura.

'I must have her, she's perfect, I want her so bad!' Asura though as he was nearly brought to tears by her beauty.

"May I hug you Eve?" Asura asked, desperately. Eve only wore a kind smile to his question as she opened her arms for him in acceptance. "Of course, however, only if your able to get to me." Eve said.

Asura was only seemed to be a few steps away from her, but knowing there was no floor, just space. The only thing he could do was wish, hope and will himself to move forward. He reached out his hand and pushed his mind, heart and soul to be in the arms of the most captivating existence he'd ever been in the presence of.

Closing his eyes and pushing his desire to be in her arms to the limits, he willed with all his heart. Until he felt her hand...

He grabbed her hand and finally pulled till their elbows touched, then wrapped his hands around her waist and dug his face into her bosom. Eve was shorter then him by a foot, the hug felt right, like a child giving a loving hug to their mother. The comfort was beyond belief, tears came fell from his face as she wrapped her arms around his head lovingly, playing with his hair, which only brought him more satisfaction.

"What a strong soul you have." Eve said softly with what seemed to be a happy and grateful smile. "I shall continue like this then." As she combed his hair, while rubbing his shoulders and back.

"As representatives of humanity and Earth, my brother and I shall see to it that those who were chosen, get what you deserve. The 'gods' or higher beings in the cosmos have grown tired of the nothingness that they have been destined to live, they wish to start something new. So new universal codes will be instated and a system platform was created as the community center."

Asura understood what was happening, he had read webnovels similar to this sort of situation, but he couldn't stop thinking of Eve, her soft voice and soothing touch. She to felt something she hadn't felt in so long if ever from a mortal, Eve felt a slight code of domination in Asuras touch. Granting Eve a slight desire to be in his possession, along with weak shocks that sooth and entice her.

"Eve, will you also have this opportunity?" Asura continued embracing her but pulled back and looked into her bright pink eyes with his deep blues. As Eve shook her head, "I have no need for it, Adam and I were born with the Code of Origin, so we don't need the help of others to grow."

"So... I can see you again?" As his deep blue eyes gained a small sparkle. Eve gave a cute giggle, wrapping her arms around his neck, and giving him a deep kiss.

This kiss was to die for, nothing in Asuras life came close to the fulfillment he felt from this kiss. Seconds, minutes, hours... it felt like the make out session he was having with Eve lasted days, before they pulled away reluctantly.

Cupping his cheek, Eve spoke from her heart, "I've grown quite a liking toward you, so of course, I'd love to see you again. If fate has it, we shall meet without any boundaries in our way. So I can truly see what kind of man you are, until then, I'll watch over you as much as I can. I promise."

Growing a bit disappointed that she will be leaving him for what felt like a long period of time, without a guaranteed chance of meeting her again. He quickly regained his hope, and decided that he'll definitely see her again. No matter what. Eve saw this, which only reaffirmed his strong will, she couldn't wait to meet him again.

But... before they have to leave each other, there're still things that must be done.

"Now. Those who are chosen by higher existences have a chance at gaining multiple blessings. However, it's up to the champions to accept those blessings." Eve lay her hands on his chest.

A black screen with gold words appeared in front of Asuras eyes.

His eyes went wide, the scene felt so natural yet so strange. 'I can't believe my eyes, is this real? These beings chose me?'

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Choose your blessings:

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Aizo here, just wanted to ask what kind of people you'd like to see in the novel. I have some ideas, but I'd love to see other great ones.