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HARRY POTTER FANFIC

Hai guys it is my first time writing a novel so there will be so many grammatical mistakes so please do point it out for me and if there are any suggestions pls do mention them Two different people got a wish from R.O.B and they both are reincarcerated as cousins(boy/girl) in a muggle born with a soul connection and they both can use each other wishes. the whole story will be where MC will be mostly OP try reading it once and give me advise on how to develop the characters and how to be the dialogue writing. THANK YOU PLS ENJOY

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Duel with Amelia Bones

" He He don't worry, I have already prepared 2 sets for you," Sister Yang said and took out 2 jackets and gave them to Amelia

" little girl right now you don't have enough magic power to open the egg full but after some time it will crack so don't worry that the egg is not hatching, this one is specially prepared for you so look forward to it," Sister Yang said to Susan rubbing her head

Amelia took the jacket and looked at it, she didn't feel anything is extraordinary in it but thinking how Susan is excited and how Yang Xin said hatching the egg with magic, She thought to try it

After wearing the jacket Amelia immediately know what is the specialty of it and supplied magic power to it

The egg cracked and an 8 legged white with black spots spider came out of it, Amelia was stunned Susan was seeing it with little stars in her eyes

The black spider crawled on Amelia's hand and came up to her Wrist and made action like biting her

Immediately Amelia felt the difference her senses are amplified, it is very little but she can see the difference due to sudden amplification

"This one is specifically selected to you, As you are an Aurora and Increased Senses will help you a lot in the field," I said smiling and seeing her reaction it is the first time she showed the shocked expression

Sister Yang explained all the functions of the Jacket, After listening to that Amelia furrowed her brows, sensing what she is thinking

" Please don't worry this type of special ones are only circulated in the inner circle of our friends, the type we will sell in the shop consists of normal cats dogs like that " Sister Yang said knowingly that all your worries are not necessary

" What is your goal, " Amelia asked seeing me

" I said it madam Bones to make you minister of ministry of magic," I said looking at her innocently

" Not regarding that, what is your goal in creating this shop spreading your influence controlling so many noble families and making very good image among masses "

" I am just a businessman Madam Bones nothing more nothing less " I didn't say anything after that

Amelia knows she can't get anything through me, she just gave up

"so what should I do now," Amelia asked me wanted to know what to do since the deal is made

" There is still so much time for Next elections so any move you will make now no one will think it is regarding election so right now you should slowly gather trusted subordinates I control only some people in ministry they will help you to raise your image do it very slowly like a frog boiling in hot water "

" There are so many Dark Wizards and some with a bounty on them My team will help you sometimes go with them and complete the tasks next is the important part I want you to do these types of adventures and Write a book regarding you Adventures, Stand like a role model for young girls and noble ladies "

" Try to see who are the people who will be your opponents try to find some dirt on them before head and keep some leash"

" That's it mostly If there is any new development we can think that time, We can directly make you minister but that time we will get unnecessary problems you should create a very good foundation in peoples heart, then even if we make moves no one will see it "

After the talks, Amelia is ready to leave and saw Susan playing with Aditi and wanted to wait sometime seeing her like that

" you can bring her anytime you are free here madam bones we will keep her company don't worry about her safety" Sister Yang Said

" In the meantime how about a spar Madam Bones, It is not with me I know my Level, it is with this person he is best under me," I said pointing to Dark arts master

" ok " Amelia also wanted to see what is the combat power of best under me

we all arrived at the training room

they both took a little bit of distance from each other and they took their stances and Sister yang came in middle and asked them are they ready they both nodded she tossed a coin into the air and the duel will start when the coin hits the ground

As soon as the duel started Amelia started firing the silent spells it looked like Expelliarmus, the dark arts master deflected them to sidewalls

She changed the spell in the middle seeing it is not useful, Dark Arts master used the pebbles that came out of the wall and transformed them into small needles silently, and pushed fired them towards Amelia

Due to the Whole lighting of the spells, She was not able to see the small Needle coming towards her but her Spider senses kicked in and she immediately bent sideward and rolled away, it was a bit late just got a small scratch on her ear

The Duel continued for a min mostly most of the time Dark Arts master was having upper hand he rarely used any harmful spells he mostly transformed so many things and used them as shields and weapons and deflected the spell which she fired mostly backward to her and let her run from left to right in the room

She is better than most people she used brain changed spells, their power intensity and tried everything in her arsenal, but she went against him he can do wandless magic so his spell casting time is mostly nil so he can have so much time thinking for the next move and he got his body always covered in a shield

This is the difference between those who are dependent on Wand and can only fire one spell at a time to The people who are Wandless who can control the Magic to their wish and do multiple things At the same time

After the Duel, we both exchanged some pleasantries, And before leaving Amelia Asked if it is ok if she can visit with Susan on weekdays, we have no problem anyways so we accepted it and everything is over for today

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Author notes

Thanks for the Support of so many people,

I am very new to this Writing field I can also see that the conversation between the characters is not refined and it is a bit rigid and I am trying to improve it, If there are Any suggestions like that pls do tell me in the comments

For so many Days Power rank of the Story is stuck between 1000 and 1500, and the number of collections, power stones, and readers all are decreasing daily from what I have seen In statistics Webnovel showed, Initially I was very depressed but after thinking for some time yes I cant get success in a single day or a single story so I am very looking forward to how to correct my mistakes and write well so please do point out if there is any suggestion I will appreciate it very much

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