I feel like the beginning chapter's suck, I'm not good at 3rd person lol. BUT, I'd still appreciate your thoughts! So let me know what you think! <3
On that note I plan to be in Nor's perspective for future chapters, if you feel 3rd person is lacking, I'll switch to first person. Personally I feel like I write first person quicker (may or may not be true lol), but if ya'll want it to continue in 3rd person let me know, I just feel I'm terrible writing 3rd person so feedback is definitely welcome. Preferably mandatory lol. Thanks for reading! :)
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