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He grabbed her by the waist and set him on his lap. He started to kiss her neck and play with her nipples, making her moan. He used one hand on her vagina and one on her nipples. He soon felt her juices on his cock, making him hard. She watched videos, but was surprised by Johns length. He was 7 inches long, and would probably grow even bigger in the future.
He picked her up and brought her to the water. He got in and put her on the edge with her legs open.
He then put his mouth on her pussy, slurping up her juices. She moaned and put her hand on his head, while his tongue played with her clit and his finger was inserted. Juices madly came out which he gladly slurped up. Soon, she twitched and started cumming.
He smiled, and grabbed her and put her in the pond. He opened up her legs with her facing him, and put his dick at her entrance.
"Are you ready?"
She nodded with anticipation.
He slowly entered, making her twitch in pain. Soon, he felt her hymen. He grabbed her face and kissed her and pinched her nipples, then broke the hymen. She screamed, and tears flowed out, which he licked up.
"Are you okay?"
"I'm fine, but wait a little while"
After a few minutes of him slowly going in and out, she started showing signs of pleasure.
He fastened his pace and started kissing her neck. Soon, he was going full speed and slamming her into the wall. His dick constantly touched her womb, causing her to cum many times.
After the third time she came, he brought her out and put her in doggy style. He grabbed her arms and put his dick inside her. He slammed into her, and broke into her womb. She came instantly, and soon her womb was being messed up.
He slammed constantly inside her, and the sounds of clapping, moaning, and slapping was heard.
He picked her up, stood up, and slammed her on his cock. Her tongue rolled out and his dick reached the end of her womb. He constantly lifted and dropped her, messing up her insides.
"Agh, I'm gonna cum"
"CUM INSIDE ME!"
He did as she said, and came directly inside her womb. She came again from his cum, and when he pulled out, a pop noise sounded, and cum gushed out.
They layed on the floor together, while playing around.
"Avery, I love you. If I ask you to be my wife will you accept me?"
"Of course I will, I love you too" they kissed, and then he picked her up and walked back to her house.
He went up to her room to put her in her bed. When she was in the bed he smiled. He placed birth control and water on her desk, a note to put ice on her vagina when she wakes up if she's sore, and a picture of them on the rock.
The picture had the camera with a perfect angle. The camera was below them, tilted up, but you could still see the pond in front of them. The moon was also right above their heads, with moonlight shining down on them. The kiss was also perfect, because he actually set up a heart on the other side of the pond that completely circle the rock in the picture.
(https://allpoetry.com/poem/1399342--Kissing-You-In-The-Moonlight-Forever--by-Poetic-Soldier , picture looks like this. The poem is also good if you want to read it. )