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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Where Is It? (106)

Queen Vegeta stared out of Broly's window confusedly.

"It's supposed to be here right?" she said, looking left and right for her home planet.

"Yeah.....I must have made a mistake with the calculations, even accounting for the movement around the star, it should still be here," Broly said, going back to the supercomputer in his room.

"Uhm, Broly? A word," Mr Yellow said awkwardly, deeply disturbed by the conclusion he had drawn.

Broly saw the arrangement of metal on Mr Yellow's holographic face, knowing what emotion he was feeling.

Dread.

"What did you figure out?" Broly asked, preparing himself for any bad news.

"Well I did some calculations and it seems that the nearby planets and asteroids that we flew past on our way here were all affected by a significant impact that occurred in this place," Mr Yellow said gently.

Broly's eyes widened.

"You don't think..."

"It's more than likely," Mr Yellow said, recapping the data in his head.

Broly gritted his teeth and furrowed his eyebrows, his anger getting larger as his hands gripped tightly. The atmosphere around him turned heavy as a thin line of ki hummed around his body, his hair turning yellow and his eyes blue.

"Frieza!" he whispered harshly, his ki fluctuating in his body as he spoke.

"Chill brother! Now is not the time to lose your cool, especially when there is a bomb in the other room," Mr Yellow said worriedly.

Broly sighed and calmed down, letting his hair return to normal.

He had never met anyone on his home planet and now he would never get the opportunity to, permanently robbed of that privilege by Frieza, whose name had suddenly jumped up the list of important things that needed taking care of.

Although Broly had no attachment to the Planet it still left an extremely bitter taste in his mouth and he felt that this was something he could not tolerate.

'I'll kill him!' he thought decisively, unable to even think of why he should spare that tyrant.

Broly loosened his fists and sighed out.

"How do you think she'll take it?"

Mr Yellow scoffed.

"She's going to fricking explode!" Mr Yellow said, diving backwards.

"That's not funny," Broly said a small smile on his face.

"Think about it, she grew up on that place and is beyond attached to it, she only left out of fear for her life and probably planned to regroup and attack Frieza later, spending the last decade deeply wishing that she could go back," Mr Yellow said, thinking critically.

Broly frowned as he realised the truth in Mr Yellow's words.

Queen Vegeta would surely snap if she found out.

"I don't want to tell her," Broly said, voicing his opinion.

"You have to," Mr Yellow said softly.

Broly frowned even harder.

"Why?"

"Because especially after everything she's been through she deserves to know and it's not like it's your fault. Its either short-term conflict and long-term peace or short-term peace and long-term conflict," Mr Yellow said wisely.

Broly's face melted as he realised his only option.

"That's smart," he said turning around to leave.

"You programmed me," Mr Yellow said, plugging himself into his own computer.

Broly chuckled wryly and left his bedroom, going to the navigation room to break the news.

"Queen Vegeta?" Broly said, calling her attention.

"Did you figure it out the problem?" she asked eagerly.

Broly sighed and softened his gaze, looking into her agitated eyes.

"There's no easy way to say this but...."

Queen Vegeta looked at Broly with panic written on her face.

'Please don't-'

"Planet Vegeta was destroyed"

Queen Vegeta's eyes widened as he body buckled, literally weighed down under the distressing news. Her teeth gnashed against each other and her fists tightened, a thin wave of pure white ki rose for her body and then expanded, sending a wind wave to the ends of the ship.

'It can't be!'

She wanted to argue and prove that Broly was lying but his face was honest as always.

He had a look of concealed anger as well.

Her visage broke and her teeth cracked, a furious and bitter woman emerging from her aloof figure.

Broly looked sympathetically at Queen Vegeta, understanding that this was a horrible thing to hear.

Queen Vegeta's eyes were stuck on the floor, the imagery of her fellow Saiyans moments before the deaths in their space pods, flowing through her head. She then remembered the defeated look on her husband's face as she left the planet reluctantly and how she wished every day for the last decade that she could go back.

"FRIEZAAAAAAAAA!"

Queen Vegeta shouted out loudly, releasing all of her anger in a single yell. The aura around her changed, the pure white becoming a thick and deep yellow. Her hair raised towards the sky and became solid, the smooth and silky spikes now like rocks as lightning arced around her.

'Super Saiyan!' Broly thought watching the bright glow in front of him, barely able to stomach the shine without needing shielding.

Queen Vegeta had shouted but her anger hadn't gone anywhere, the resentment she felt too great to even describe.

"AAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

The pure bright aura around her grew stronger, the pressure inside the ship increasing a few folds as the air was forcefully pushed away from her body.

"Queen Vegeta! Please try to calm down," Broly said softly, readying some ki in his body in case he would have to restrain her.

"Why didn't you stop him?" Queen Vegeta asked, her tone surprisingly clear.

'Ah!'

Broly had always assumed that Freiza needed the Saiyans to do his leg-work, this was the main impression he got from the other Saiyans and he was just as surprised as she was about the Planet's destruction.

But it had never occurred to him that he could have done something about it.

'If I went there sooner could I have saved them?'

Queen Vegeta saw Broly's guilty expression and her anger doubled.

"WHY DIDN'T YOU STOP HIM!" she shouted again, the aura around her becoming much stronger.

"I-"

"SHUT UP!" she bellowed, charging towards him.

"Ah?"

Queen Vegeta's figure blurred in front of Broly, he blinked and he saw a ki powered fist coming towards his face.

BINK!

Broly stumbled backwards under the harsh collision caught by surprise at how powerful the attack was.

"You're a disappointment to your race and personally disgusting to me! You aren't even worthy to be called a Saiyan!" Queen Vegeta yelled, looking down on him while readying ki in her hands.

Early Chapter today

Storyteller is going to take a break

I feel like this section doesn't really need hype

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