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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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#ADVENTURE
#ROMANCE
#R18
#COMEDY
#HAREM
#DRAGON

Flying Oozarus (118)

A short round alien opened the door hastily.

"Captain Bonyu! We've detected-"

The Frieza Force soldier suddenly stopped talking, realizing the room was empty.

He kissed his teeth quickly and exited the room, moving into the office next door.

"Cui!" he shouted, upon entering the room.

Cui, who was leaning back with his feet on his desk as he slept, was abruptly woken up by the sudden shout.

"What do you want?" Cui said mildly, unable to tell who had called him but he discerned it was not Lord Frieza.

"We've detected an unknown ship on our skyline!" the soldier reported.

"What are you waiting for? Blast it out of the sky!" Cui said, slamming his fist onto his table.

"Yes, Captain Cui!" the soldier said, scuttling out of the room.

The soldier quickly went to the weapons department, informing them of the command from the higher-ups. In a matter of moments, several missiles were fired from the base, startling a few soldiers who were out in front on the land, just returning from their assignments.

The missiles soared high into the sky, the refined weaponry having no issue travelling long distances and tracing Zelta on the skyline.

The missiles locked down the ship, just a few metres from impact when a huge thick green ki sphere surrounded the whole thing, creating a spectacle for those down below. Dark green ki, enveloped the ship, one layer clinging closely to Zelta's surface while the other layer spread out around it, forming the massive sphere.

BOOM!

BOOM!

BOOM!

The missiles exploded harmlessly on the surface of the barrier, having next to no impact on but a few seconds later the outer barrier disappeared.

Queen Vegeta walked to Broly, who was seemingly staring into space, his eyes and aura filled with ki.

'So he wasn't even trying when we sparred' she thought, even more self-conscious.

Trying to shake off her doubt she headed to the opening in the ship, able to see the land which looked to be a thousand miles down below.

A firm hand weighed down on her shoulder.

"Let's do this!" he said, slightly excited.

Queen Vegeta saw the energy in his eyes and breathed out, calming herself down.

"Mr Yellow! After you loot the location I sent, circle around the-"

"I know! I know! Just go do it!" Mr Yellow said, ushering the two of them.

Broly smiled at his robot and put on the Blutz Wave helmet.

"I'll transform first, when we hit the ground I want you to transform and wreak havoc!"

"Sounds like a plan"

Broly jumped out of the ship, feeling weightless suddenly but then picking up speed as he hurtled to the ground. Queen Vegeta watched Broly fall, his figure getting smaller as she waited patiently.

Broly looked down at the military base, analysing it with his own two eyes.

The headquarters was a compressed construction, the entire thing only taking up a small part of the Planet's surface, the pitch-black sky in the background only hinting at the evil deeds that they were responsible for. The buildings were slightly eccentric in shape, many domes and cylinders constructed compactly of the same white stone.

It was at this moment a thin beam of ki raced from the building, suddenly hurtling towards Broly's spaceship, consequently flying towards him at the same time.

'Let's do this!' Broly thought, pumping himself up.

He pressed a button by the side of his helmet and a bright white soundless light flashed onto his eyes causing him mild discomfort as he struggled to keep his eyes open, resisting the urge to blink.

'I'll have to do something about that'

The same pressure like before built up in his tail, the feeling as if it would burst occurring, making him feel warm on the inside.

Broly's eyes turned red again as his teeth jutted out in length, becoming the same snarling fangs as before. This time his hair remained the same style, drastically increasing in length to accommodate his huge figure. His muscles expanded, becoming more than ten times bigger in size and wild brown fur sprouted out of his skin, the only section smooth were his face and abs.

Broly's feet, if they could even be called that also changed, becoming much more hand-shaped in structure and his legs pulsated once, the muscle hardening immediately. The small helmet around Broly's head, broke apart without a fight, unable to cage his expanding body.

'Seems like there were no hiccups this time' Broly thought, unable to shake off the excitement that came with getting back at Frieza. Even in his great ape form, a long smile appeared on his face, giving him a very scary appearance.

"What in the name of King Cold is that!" a blue-skinned soldier said, pointing to the small figure in the sky that was rapidly growing.

Broly moved his massive hand, he too slightly surprised by the size and moved it to the laser beam heading towards him, not even bothering to cover his hand with ki.

PSH!

'It's like warm water'

Broly's hand resisted the beam effortlessly, the impact spreading evenly over the massive surface-area of Broly's hand, not even harming the hairs on it.

"My god!"

"It's a fucking monkey!"

"I ain't never seen some shit like this before"

The soldiers could only watch in awe as the huge figure came down from the sky, slowly diffusing the beam.

'It's my turn'

Queen Vegeta leapt down from the ship, diving down in a streamlined manner towards Broly who had his legs spread out. Almost invisibly, she caught up to him and clung to the surface of his body, grabbing some of his hairs.

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"What the fuck are you guys doing? Use all the weapons we have!" an engineer said hastily, urging everyone to actually attack instead of staring.

"Somebody get in contact with Lord Frieza!"

"What the fuck? Our communications are down! Our signal has been shut off!"

"Sound the alarm!"

A blaring siren rang out in the entire Frieza Force compound, even those in the bathrooms were not safe.

"CALLING EVERY ABLE-BODIED SOLDIER! EXECUTE EMERGENCY ORDER ONE!"

"Emergency order one?"

That meant that the worst-case scenario had occurred and an enemy had snuck in and was launching an attack, meaning they would have to mobilise immediately.

In a matter of seconds, several soldiers were lined-up and armed, stationed in front of the headquarters with guns.

Some soldiers charged out of the base.

"Who do you think has the guts to oppose the Frieza Force?"

"Probably some side characters who think they can overpower the main ones"

"I can't wait to see-"

DDDOOOOM!

A heavy thud quaked through the ground as Broly's two feet descended, sending a horrific earthquake through the land. A thick green fog surrounded his appearance, acting as a mist preventing the soldiers from seeing him.

"Fire!" Cui commanded, using his small authority to coordinate the actions of the common foot soldiers.

They wasted no time and levitated, using their small ki pools to gain what they thought was an aerial advantage and fired several ki beams and blasts with rifles in their hands. Descending a rain of energy into the fog.

"Cease!" Cui commanded, as the fog did not stir once throughout the entire barrage and he wanted to see what was going on.

Broly's big red eyes flickered once, slowly creeping out as his heavy footsteps terrified the soldiers.

"ROOOOOOAAAAAAR!"

A huge monster leapt out of the fog, another Great Ape jumping high into the air before spreading wide to tackle the soldiers on the ground.

"GREAT APE!"

I definitely watched an episode of Attack on Titan when I wrote this

50 stones in one day lmao

You guys aren't playing games

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