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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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#DRAGON

Preparations (117)

"Out of the Four hundred and forty-seven planets under Frieza's control, the two planets that are most likely to act as his headquarters are Planet Frieza 17 and Planet Frieza 79," Broly said, driving Zelta manually in the navigation room.

Queen Vegeta walked towards him, decked out in the new and improved, Saiyan-style battle crystal armour Broly had made.

"That arrogant bastard! He had the audacity to name an entire Solar System after himself!" Queen Vegeta said, her voice holding no mercy for that particular alien.

"I was able to conclude that Frieza is currently on Planet 79 now, so we'll attack 17 first, steal and regroup then attack 79," Broly said decisively.

"The whole planet? By ourselves? Don't you have like a robot army or something?" Queen Vegeta said, still not 100% confident the two of them could do everything.

Broly scoffed.

"Your power level is around 7 million, add that to Super Saiyan, what chance do they have?" Broly asked, not sure why Queen Vegeta was doubting herself and him.

"Even still, do you think it will be enough to take everyone on the Planet? We are just jumping straight into enemy lines after all," Queen Vegeta said, still apprehensive.

'She's still scared'

It made sense.

For the last few weeks, she had been getting beaten senseless by Broly and while they sparred and she still didn't hold a significant advantage over him in the slightest.

The only proof she had of getting stronger was growing numbers on a screen and not actual combat evidence. This wasn't enough to combat the years of fear and hesitation to go against Frieza that was instilled into her on Planet Vegeta.

Broly got up out of his seat and faced Queen Vegeta, once again reminded of how tall he was when he had to look down on her. He reached for her hands and held them tightly, a warm expression forming on his face.

"You're much stronger than you know, and way out of the league of Frieza's soldiers, I believe in you and you should believe in yourself," Broly said softly, his deep voice doing wonders to move Queen Vegeta.

Her face reddened again as she looked up at Broly, almost lost in his deep black eyes, her heart double pace as she felt something she hadn't felt before.

Broly was the first to break away as he still had to wear his armour, although it could barely be described as that.

Broly's words were also not lies either, the average power level for a Frieza Force soldier was around 1 to 2 thousand, laughable at this point.

"Do you think we should use the Great Ape just to make things quicker?" Broly asked, picking up an augmented helmet.

Back on Sythis, there was already a multitude of devices that could channel or process certain energy waves so Broly had done the same thing to moonlight, using his supercomputer to process the reactions with his eye cell and singling out Blutz Waves from this.

It really was very simple with the Tuffle technology.

"Just to be on the safe side and we can siege some other of his Planets in person before we go for him," Queen Vegeta said quietly, still thinking to herself.

'That means I would have to cut off communications so that no distress signals went out, it's a bit of effort but if it makes her feel better it's worth it,' Broly thought quickly.

"It's not an issue, just give me a few moments to get ready," Broly said, turning around to go and make the preparations.

It was then he felt a soft sensation on his back, two soft sensations to be specific.

"Thank you," Queen Vegeta said even quieter as she embraced Broly, moving her arms around his slim mid-section.

Broly's heart nearly skipped a beat, thumping thunderously in his chest as the feeling from before resurfaced with new strength.

Without waiting for him to respond, Queen Vegeta detached from him, going back to the Control Center.

Queen Vegeta pricked herself.

'I said I wasn't going to act like some lovesick teenager, but Broly...'

She too put her hand on her chest, feeling it pumping as well.

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Bonyu looked at her screen from her station, slightly confused.

According to what was displayed, Lord Frieza himself had requested for practically all of the food and precious resources in storage to be transported to a location about 250 kilometres away from the actual military base, looking as if he wanted to separate the two. What's more is that he stated that he wanted all of his soldiers, including guards, to take part in a rigorous military exercise that would mean for the next 24 hours the goods would be undefended.

This looked extremely suspicious.

What's more, was that Frieza hadn't given any kind of warning for this drastic event to have taken place, not even mentioning it as a topic for the summit that was soon to be taking place.

Bonyu squinted at her screen, trying but failing to understand what logical reason Frieza could have to make this kind of decision. Her instincts told her that something was up but she didn't want to make a hasty decision.

She wouldn't put it past Frieza to do something odd just because he could but it was still uncommon.

If she delayed the order Frieza could get angry and kill her but if she approved the order, Frieza could get angry and kill her.

She was between a rock and a hard place.

'Someone couldn't have possibly done this on purpose? To initiate some kind of surprise attack?'

But who would be bold enough to impersonate Lord Frieza? Let alone attack his base of operations!

She sighed before approving the order and assigning the corresponding personnel to carry it out, trying to get on with the rest of her work but a nagging feeling gnawed at the back of her mind.

'I've already approved it and hopefully, my race has a high enough ranking with Frieza to overlook any problems that occur, in any case, I'll take the week off and vacate to my home planet'

Bonyu got up from her desk in Frieza Force Headquarters and started packing her stuff, already calling for her private ship to be prepared. She barely took time off her work and hated doing things spontaneously but she just had a very bad feeling.

She wouldn't tell anyone though.

A curvy red-skinned woman with bright white hair navigated her way through the building, many other races and species fleeing from her path as she walked.

'I should have delayed the order!' she thought, thinking about the situation over and over again.

Although Frieza would not be happy to receive confirmation of a request he personally made, she could have inquired some of his ministers or even King Cold who was more merciful. She entered her ship as she registered her holiday on the Frieza Force database.

Instances like this were not uncommon, many of the aliens who handled Frieza's personal affairs frightened and hesitant to do anything that specifically related to him, from the fear of being killed just because Frieza felt like it.

That's enough for today

I'll set the power stone goals so it works like this

Under 50 stones: 1 chapter per day

100 - 149 stones: 2 chapters per day

150+ stones: 3 chapters per day

250 stones: 5 chapters bulk release every day for the next week (PS I don't expect us to hit 250 lol)

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