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Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword

Observe how Ning Bai, big brother of Ning Rongrong aim to be at the top. ------------------------------------------------------ I don't know anything that you recognize all rights go to the author. The cover is not mine. --------------------------------------------------- This is my first time writing something and English is not even my second language so I will be thankful with the correction of grammar and orthography. Constructive comments are appreciated, plis avoid toxic comments.

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Break Through 2

-Ning Xiangxie POV-

"I was absorbing the ring when..."

-Flashback of the ring absorbing day-

I summon my Fire Volcano Sword spirit and notice its closeness and eagerness to the plant in front. I slash and kill it without much difficulty. After a second, a red spirit ring manifested on top of it. Sensing the pressure of the ring I cannot help smiling (I'm gonna become one of the youngest titled douluo and even with the most precious thing for spirit masters, a 100.000 years old ring.)

I sit in lotus position attracting the ring towards my sword. I sense the power flowing to my sword, forcing me to concentrate all my spirit, mental and psychical power to avoid it turning berserk. All goes well until a big mental chock comes from the ring saying "BURN" I confront it head-on. I focus my mental power to destroy the plant spirit, listening the last words of the Lily "BURN! DIE!".

At this moment all power of the ring comes to me like influenced by the flower last conscience, being absorbed too quickly. Having not recuperated my mental state, I can't control the new evolved power. Even when I'm usually immune to my own fire, it starts burning me, the pain so strong that trying to recuperate seems to be impossible. Losing my strength, I resign to my fate of burning alive (Sorry Bai, Rong it seems like I can't see you grow and protect you. I'll pray in the afterlife for your well being).

With a last effort I turn to look at my children through the glass only to see the shocked face of Rongrong. Suddenly there's an explosion and through the smoke, I can see my Bai running towards me with his spirit sword in his hands. (No! Stop! I don't wanna be the cause of your death. Feng! Bone! Sword! Stop him. You must live, Bai!) I try to say but the only thing that causes is tears to fall over my face that doesn't endure too much before evaporating due to the high temperature.

Suddenly, 9 bright colored lights come out of Bai's sword that emerges in a black one. After 0.1 s a white light appears merging with the previous black forming a dark gray light. Bai jumps forward to me piercing through the flames. I look at Bai's eyes and can see his resolve, resolve to live, to protect, not to die. Suddenly the power of the flames, as if absorbed by Bai's sword, decreases a little and Bai falls unconscious (Knowing how much you fight, how could mother give up? I will live for both you and Rong!).

Taking advantage of the moment of weakness of the flames, I jump toward the wall moving away of Bai, breaking the wall flying out the mansion arriving to the garden. Then I return to a lotus position and continue absorbing the ring. (I'm not gonna lose to a dead plant, watch the power and determination of a mother!) Putting all my efforts into controlling the flames, I recuperate its control just in time to them to return to the normal intensity. All this happening in 0,5 seconds.

After having in control of the fire, without any more mental consciousness of the Lily, I am able to continue absorbing the Lily. In contrast to before, I easily finish absorbing the ring.

After some time, I finally open my eyes and stand up. Sensing the power surge of my body I know that I am now a titled douluo, Volcano Sword Douluo. (This is not important, I must find how is Bai).

I run to the previous room and see Feng and Maya {One of the clan members having blood spirit, a spirit specialized in boost and healing} healing Bai.

I very worried ask them "How is little Bai?". Maya without turning to see me or pausing her spirit ability says "He has burns all around the body, I only can say that it's a miracle that he's alive, we must maintain the constant healing to preserve his life". I fall to my knees crying "It's all my fault, if only I didn't absorb a10.000 years ring, anything of this will happen and Bai will be alright".

Suddenly someone holds my shoulder, turning a see Chen Xin that says "Don't be too pessimistic, Bai is a strong child and surely he will withstand, there's always hope when there's life".

"Where's Rongrong, is she ok?" I said frightened. "She only fell unconscious due to the shock we had. Bone took her to her room and she is resting there" Answer Chen Xin. "I will stay with Bai until it improve. I bow to the heavens that if he dies, I will follow so I pray with all my whole for his well being because it's all of my fault" I say causing the other people at the room to sigh exhausted.

I stayed in the same room as Bai while the clan healers are interchanging to maintain a constant healing for Bai until after 3 days Maya says "It's alright, he isn't death danger anymore but the damage at the body is very large and seems to have some effect in his spirit so it's impossible to estimate how much time needs to awaken. The best it will be to take him to his room and carefully observe him for any change". I say "Thanks Maya I will stay with him until he wakes" {I changed the part of the maid of the last chapter, when writing I think it was better the part of the maid but thinking of mother love a think that even it is less impacting at reading it has more sense}.

I spent the time at Bai's room, always worried about his well being, only eating and sleeping the minimum necessary until after 1 month he wakes up. Seeing Bai woke up, I can't help to be happy and try not to cry (You wake up, mommy is so happy!). Then I run to find the others to say the good news, taking Rong at my arms and returning to Bai's room.

When all the family arrive at Bai's room I don't know what I say, like in automode only thinking in the relive of seeing Bai awake and fine. We finally leave Bai's room and I fall unconscious.

Later I am being waken by Feng saying "Bai woke up. You're ok? We must talk to Bai about all but maybe it's better for you to rest, you're very tired of no sleeping". I answer "No, I spent 1 month what is a few more time. I will explain all to him".

We go to Bai's room and I can't help to smile when seeing him standing up and I say "To start you stayed unconscious 1 month and I will explain what happened that day. I was absorbing the ring when..."

-End of flashback-

-End of Ning Xiangxie POV-

So another chapter, the first time that I write to chapter consecutively, without taking into a count the new chapters of novel that a follow and read. Next chapter will be post at evening-night so you must wait a few hours. What do you think of my first change POV, bring something good to the novel or is it simple boring, plis comment. Thanks for reading!

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