Hey! This is me, the writer of DiD. I'm very honored and glad that you decided to read my little experiment instead of all the other content you have available. This means a lot to me! Since you decided to read this as well, allow me to address some issues in my work.
As you noticed, DiD chapters are longer than most chapters on this site, that's the case because of my peculiar storytelling style. My goal is to give part of this world to you, the reader, or even make you feel as if you are truly a part of it. That's why I spend a lot of time describing many things. Hopefully this style of writing works for you and you will be able to experience the events of the novel as vividly as possible.
Also... English is NOT my first or even the second language. I believe that is very apparent. I spend a lot of time editing my chapters, but many mistakes still remain. Hopefully, grammatical and other mistakes will not ruin your experience of the book. Most mistakes in conversations are intentional. However, I have no excuse for all the mistakes coming from the narrator of the novel, so I can only apologize and hope that you manage to enjoy it none the less.
The time between chapters is also rather large, and it will remain that way until I can dedicate more time to writing. Currently, I am studying and working at the same time. Besides that, I have many other responsibilities and activities, so even though I love writing, I am unable to dedicate as much time to it as I would like to. Hopefully, in the future, I can put more of my time into writing for you!
I love feedback and criticism. So feel free to write anything you want in the comments. I will also create a dedicated discord account soon so that I can communicate directly with readers about anything that may bother them or about anything that they may find interesting.
And lastly. Thank you one more time! Your time, interest, and support mean the world to me. I hope that you can find Divinity in Decadence enjoyable!