Hey guys, this is my first novel, it's pretty bad compared to some, I've remade the novel the second time, because I realized just how unnatural the story flowed before I remade it
Also I want to try out the first few chapters before just scrapping the story all together, to be honest with you, the thoughts on creating this novel was just on a whim, I have a story in my head, but since it wasn't thought of thoroughly before hand the story has a lot of holes.
So I want you guys to give me criticism, and tips on how to make it better
anyway I'm here to tell you that this story is really inspired by multiple novels, mainly
Omniscient Readers Viewpoint
The Novels Extra
The Author's POV
SSS Class Suicide Hunter
and a bit more, also the owner of the cover art, if you want me to change the cover I will gladly do so, so please comment if you do.