[DC x Overlord] Bloodbound

I am the author and I think I did a great job

No way I’m the first review for this. This is crazy good so far and is not super edgy or anything for being an Overlord fic. I would compare this with some of the best overlord fics and I can’t wait until the DC part comes to play. Really check this out.

I NEED MORE CHAPTER I NEED MORE CHAPTER I NEED MORE CHAPTER I NEED MORE CHAPTER I NEED MORE CHAPTER I NEED MORE CHAPTER I NEED MORE CHAPTER I NEED MORE CHAPTER !!!

iz vry gut n i reawy wike it a wot; gut characters und interesting story that really has opened up a lot (yes I got bored of typing like an idiot) in the second volume. At first it was an interesting look into the world - refreshing since most fanfics follow someone who is rolling into it and can purchase constant advantages. It really makes you feel her struggle when you find out about "that"... Really made that pudding session with Vic hit hard ngl. When the "new world" finally comes... You are most definitely invested to see everything finally go her way!

Review this as of chapter 17. The story is going good so far and the main character is decent too

Pretty cool, it's OP but not that op , like the stats over 1000 liket other ff, cause if it's too op it will ruin the fighting sensation[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

Love the fic, the Overlord chapters really remind when I was playing my first mmorpg

this is actually of great quality. I hope this is continued for a long time.

This is a great novel, keep up the good work. :)

you deserve every star for this story :)

Amazing book, please keep writing. Don't drop, please

More plz love it

I personally feel that the Beginning before the Mc got to her new world dragged on way to long. Aside from that the writing and Characters and story so far are fantastic

The first few chapters are readable but have really inconsistent grammar, especially when it comes to using the correct tenses which does take you out of the experience if you know how to speak English correctly. No set schedule for updates but they are frequent enough. Story development is rough, it falls into the same trap all overlord fics do, too much time wasted in Yggdrasil and the real world and by the time the Mc makes it DC Earth the story has lost all it's steam. There's a bunch of Pov's from other characters way to frequently, it wouldn't be so bad if the Mc actually accomplished something meaningful before we have to see the POV of strangers we don't care about. The MC has no drive and is just wandering around while things happen out of chance, give her a real goal like conquering the covens or raising the kid to be a powerful servant and I mean make it explicit, show her working towards these goals, don't just have the Mc vaguely hint at what she wants to do in her thoughts and then not do anything. Character design is bland, all we know about the Mc is she doesn't want to be a slave and she isn't completely evil, she needs meaningful interactions with other fleshed out characters to make her interesting which is gonna be difficult since the only people she has around are an OC NPC that is even more bland than the Mc, a baby and a lizard. It would have been better to have another NPC like Shalltear accompany her since we all like her and it would provide an interesting dynamic like the Mc trying to maintain the image of a supreme being while curbing Shalltear's evil tendencies. World background isn't great either, Yggdrasil didn't feel like a game, the real world got random Cyberpunk 2077 elements thrown in (that didn't matter too much, it was just weird) and early medieval England is pretty poorly done so far. The vikings were just insane, homicidal lunatics that killed everything that moves rather than taking slaves a they would have IRL and didn't flee in fear from a giant wolf monster like any real human would. Also she states she's near a village and then finds a cave where there is a dead dragon(for centuries) and a giant hoard of gold, she sees the gold from the road outside the cave. There is no way the reader can be expected to believe that that is just there and no one has picked the place clean, the author put very little thought into the world. Overall I wouldn't recommend this, it's an overlord fic without anything we love from overlord and a DC fic set nearly 1000 years before the main DC timeline. Goodbye.