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Huntress

Why would he have any faith in Mark whatsoever, I guess it could be interpreted as desperate pleading to anyone who'll listen but that's not the way it's written at all, Soon seems to be perfectly rational and lucid here.

"these" are speech marks, that means he is not speaking 'internally', he's saying this out loud.

The story is convoluted and forced and the character interactions are painful to read, the only halfway decent parts of this fic are the lemons and even they are average at best. Don't waste your time with this, just go read Maidenless No Longer, it's 1000X better.

His return by death should send him back to the last time he rested at a site of grace.

I can't stand the MC it's like he's a 14 year old's idea of what a cool guy is and almost every line he says and decision he makes annoys me. The story development is bad as well, nothing interesting is happening because the MC always makes the most nonsensical, directionless decision possible, the story feels less like a story and more like a collection of loosely connected events events.

13000 valis for 1 Kobold????