Zerviil

If readers know every detail of the MC's battle plan, the outcome of a battle will be too predictable, no anticipation. I prefer leaving small hints and the imagination to you guys. I know I can't change your mind, but give it some thought on why I chose this approach.

Some of your points are valid. I'm just curious how you see her as bland when I gave her background and meaningful interaction at chapter 17. I also had her an established goal already at chapter 19 and her commit on it by chapter 23 (She just arrived for 3 days, don't expect her to conquer an entire territory in a short span of time). I'm just assuming you skip out on those because I clearly hinted at them.

Valaine can make more, the world is not scarce of opportunists, especially in the medieval age.

Valaine has dignity and self-respect, a queen does not eat food from the floor.

She will soon make vampires of her own, what's a vampire queen without her thralls?

maybe soon, but Im actually referring to her combat prowess. She wasn't able to shine much.

you can't escape peak

1066 AD, but she doesn't know specifically yet. She only know that she arrived around the 11th and 12th century.

Exactly at 1066 when Duke William of Normandy and King Harald of Norway was trying to conquer England. I see your points and they are all valid. Thanks for pointing them out, ill rewrite all of the historical discrepancies.

Im not feeling it tbh