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Fighting_Dreamer
Fighting_DreamerLv41yr
2023-10-29 08:32

The story started promising. The story elements are not original but it's still engaging. So after reading the first 40 chapters, I ended up searching for the Chinese novel and found it. Unfortunately, after the MC completes his plan of obtaining all the power pearls in the city and getting the OP mutated dog as his pet, everything in the story went downhill. Mostly because the author decided to pad the word count. What I mean is instead of making things simple and straightforward, he spends paragraphs and even pages talking about the thoughts of side characters and extras. A small gang acts arrogant against the MC and then MC kills them with his OP power and then those people regret their actions before they die. Such a scenario is repeated throughout the story and normally it would only take 1 page to tell it, but the author spends 4 chapters or even more where we read about the thoughts of the extras like how they think the MC is stupid, or how excited they are to have found an easy prey. As a result, the story stops any momentum. At first there is the big goal of getting strong, but now that the MC is strong, the story loses its goal. It's one scenario after another where people act arrogant against the MC, or are jealous of his power, and then the MC just waves his hand and literally burn all those enemies or those that he doesn't like into ashes. The story becomes repetitive and boring quickly. Verdict: The first 40 chapters - 3 stars The chapters from 40 onwards - 2 stars Total chapters I read - 127

Reincarnated in the Apocalypse: Invincibility Starts From Killing Enemies With My Own Hands

Golden Scrambled Eggs
3.5
226 Chs

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Daoist_IgN
Daoist_IgNLv6

Thanks for tasting this poison and shared it with everyone.

1yr
5
Kansuke5
Kansuke5Lv15

not to mention, character personality can change drastically. one chapter they are good people, next chapter they are envy of other and scheme against each other

11mth
Snooder
SnooderLv14

This review is spot on. The word padding gets insane after the MC gets his pet.

9mth
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Raw_Daoist_Master
Raw_Daoist_MasterLv1

Raw: 末世重生：无敌从手刃仇敌开始

1yr

BlackHat
BlackHatLv5

First 20 chapters could probably be summed up in 3-4 sentences. It's the typical Chinese story where literally everyone is black hearted before MC rebirth and ofc he will take his revenge. MC himself has a pretty bad personnality. Can see hint of MC being a perv, selfish, sadistic and I don't really like him though he hasn't crossed that line totally yet.

1yr
Casual_Vanze
Casual_VanzeLv6

Who translated this? The names keep changing and it's very inconsistent translation.

1yr
BJB_san
BJB_sanLv15

Well then, this is a little new for me. I'm very surprised that with a book that hasn't even been properly released they're already locking chapters and requiring payment. Feels to me that they're jumping the gun quite a bit right there. I would have no problems paying for a good book which this book is almost there, but it has to be a properly released book and not something I'm just waiting on that might never come out. How about you get your book released first, then I'll think about giving you any of my resources that I have worked to collect or paid to acquire.

1yr
The_AM
The_AMLv11

This author sucks. He drags a simple fight out for 4 chapters. Literally, the whole time he was explaining how all the bad guys were feeling the then when the fight starts the whole thing ends in 4 sentences. This is an author who is trying to increase word count for money. Literally 40% of the novel is irrelevant useless information. The author spent nearly 10 chapters on a side story where all the characters end up dead. It brought no new information just wasted space. However, the first 50 ch were pretty good.

10mth
MOnkey_D_Luffy
MOnkey_D_LuffyLv4

A good apocalypse novel which has the same generic plot as others where mc died and went back in time. And used all his knowledge to find treasures which can help him become strong. Although this is common plot but I like these types of stories so 5 star from me.

1yr
beetle0141
beetle0141Lv13

great story just wish we had more of it and please don't overdo the stereotypical troupes

1yr
Apocalypse_2ndLife
Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv3

Really good after a long time things make sense in any apocalypse ist novel still some Chinese bs otherwise good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
Brezer
BrezerLv14

not a bad story. man goes back to before the apocalypse . he gets setup to be safe and gets a head start he gets revenge on a few people that wronged him prior to coming back. I like the mc's attitude . I would do the same, get rid of the problem before it's a problem . I hope we get to read it.

1yr
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