Daoist_IgN

Has potential, but ruined by the author of not mastering only 1 or 2 powers and making others supplementary. but bundled him up with so many powers and different energies. At the beginning he said that 'should master the skills and not rely on system or assistance of others' but look at him. Heh. Should've been a good story though, but not my cup of tea.

So freakin' demanding.

Deep Voice, I cant imagine a kid saying something with a deep voice.

This is the first thing that came to mind, I don't know why thou.

Must've been Rear Admiral earlier?

Correct me if I am wrong, but the Refining chakra usually taught on the first day or second day of class in naruto?? only those ninja clans teaches their kids before they enroll for a headstart?.

why the need to put "inner monologue" just use 'blah blah' or he said inwardly. -__-

y the need to stay there??? find another place mf.

what dafaq!? does he have some character issue???

By keep on adding this, this author seems wronged by the world and he just write this 'casually' to vent his emotion. -__-