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The_AM
The_AMLv1110mth
2023-12-26 01:02

This author sucks. He drags a simple fight out for 4 chapters. Literally, the whole time he was explaining how all the bad guys were feeling the then when the fight starts the whole thing ends in 4 sentences. This is an author who is trying to increase word count for money. Literally 40% of the novel is irrelevant useless information. The author spent nearly 10 chapters on a side story where all the characters end up dead. It brought no new information just wasted space. However, the first 50 ch were pretty good.

Reincarnated in the Apocalypse: Invincibility Starts From Killing Enemies With My Own Hands

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Well then, this is a little new for me. I'm very surprised that with a book that hasn't even been properly released they're already locking chapters and requiring payment. Feels to me that they're jumping the gun quite a bit right there. I would have no problems paying for a good book which this book is almost there, but it has to be a properly released book and not something I'm just waiting on that might never come out. How about you get your book released first, then I'll think about giving you any of my resources that I have worked to collect or paid to acquire.

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