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Dracmon13
Dracmon13Lv51yr
2023-09-05 00:19

my honest opinion, the writing is good, and such, but it's pure nonsense, learning the dream. omnitrix on dc, dumber than a jock. forget things easily. he could get rich and face whoever he wants, but do what is a young justice fanboy

OMNITRIX (DC)

Baph0met
3.8
113 Chs

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Foxtrot_977
Foxtrot_977Lv11

What if the MC doesn't want to do all that stuff though 🤔

3mth
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Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

I read until chapter 4 so, if this is some type of masterpiece after those 4 chapters, you guys can only suffer to find out, I couldn't. The main problem with this is frustration. The MC is stupid, so you get frustrated with his thought process. When I saw that it was someone with the omnitrix in DC, I was actually hoping for that person to use his watch to improve all the aspects of his life. With certain aliens, he can become a millionaire in a few days, but from what I see the MC is just like Ben, only using the watch to fight his episodic enemies with no 'life' between the fights...

1yr

Baph0met
Baph0metAuthor

Am I allowed to do this? Its been a while since I posted this fic, and I almost forgot to do this tradition. Well, here we are.

1yr
EvergreenGaming
EvergreenGamingLv5

better then some of the omnitrix in dc i have read, tho it still falls for the same problem all of them have, introducing the omnitrix. they would not have any aliens stored inside unless this is a crossover in which case MC wouldn't get it unless it was a dark AU crossover. the rest were just minor issues this early in the story. it would have been better if MC built it and at the beginning he added dna to transform 1 at the start and upgrades the watch to hold more as the story goes. (which no other omnitrix story does from what i have seen) and the biggest problem i have with fics that do this is how to explain your power without breaking the 4th wall and lowering the quality of a fic.

1yr
Vijay_Sanwal
Vijay_SanwalLv4

best crossover between Ben 10 and dc I in joy this fic thank you

1yr
No_brain5
No_brain5Lv3

stupid mc that did not use his brain to think...

1yr
Red_Spice
Red_SpiceLv4

Writing quality is good, but story progress is soooooo boooooring I wanna sleep [img=sad]

1yr
Brock_Burns
Brock_BurnsLv2

I've read a whole lot of quotes on quotes bad books but this takes it man like the MC is so stupid and how he uses the Omnitrix in such a bad way that physically hurts me quality to this book is that one of the books that has few grammar mistakes

11mth
Melitia_Snek
Melitia_SnekLv5

Good writing quality but terrible story development and character design. The plot is forced and the MC is stupid. He uses the Omnitrix only to fight, not improve his life. He could easily make money with some of the aliens, yet doesn't.

1yr
HekAnwdn_
HekAnwdn_Lv1

Um enredo completamente sem graça. A personalidade do personagem principal é mal trabalhada. Não estou dizendo que é ruim. É terrívelmente mediano, apenas.

1yr
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